🖤DREAM WEAVER❄
Self-Published
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Description
When you are young you dream to become something that was out of normal. Dreaming about having superpowers, having a rich life when you growup but reality hits you harder than you think. that once dazzling dreams you have when you are child is just a fantasy hits harder when you have to face the reality. Follow Sylvia as she tackles the reality.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- How annoying
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 1,410
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Moon descentRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5The story actually is nice, i like the character of sylvia since she's mischievous and funny being paired up with illysha. I give 4.5 since i don't know wether the story would improve and i think the author should not be lazy with his/her grammar and thx god the author fix the past chapters i didn't actually think he would done it since his/her novels have been unfinished one way or another keep up the good work hopefully you won't drop your work again.
- Ostracized PeakRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Initial review, as of chapter 2 of this series - "Dream Weaver".
For a main character, Sylvia is rather an annoying brat who sincerely wants to drag everyone who comes to her escapades. One of her charms that I like about her, albeit for reviewing this short, is she is very optimistic and pretty based about herself.
Style: 4.5/5. I want it to rate it by this stance since the author is somehow finding him/herself. The writing skill is rather convoluted. Some punctuations are misplaced and the dialogues are somewhat unclear. Third person - point of view. Present? - Past Tense. All in all, pretty good job for a debuting writer.
Story: ... is center around Sylvia and allegedly accomplice - Illysia. Though, I instead getting the clasp of the narrative since it's labeled as "Comedy". 4.5/5.
Grammar: uhmm,... I've to say the grammar is intelligible. However, it takes off the thrill of the story when I can't certainly follow how each transition would start and end - vice-versa. Although, the author has a massive cojones. 3/5.
Character: Sylvia is not a generic comedic individual you can encounter everyday or somewhere. Aforementioned to the spoilers above. Her characteristics is similar to a Chuunibyou. Because it's not every book, I've read therefore so far, the protagonist is a "błazen" and she is a female too. Who would have thought that a gal can't be funny?... 5/5.
Overall: The author is pretty much a novice, though, I am being too lenient as possible. I hope you can continue to write more of this series. I do enjoy it. 4/5.