Dragonfall: Soulborn
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Damien's life was more perfect than he could have ever dreamed, until everything was taken from him. Will his despair and desire for vengeance strip him of his humanity? Will his trials break him? Will his last breath be taken on the blood soaked sands of the colosseum? Or will he endure and rise like a phoenix from the ashes of his old life?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Oddmar
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 283
- Views
- 28,616
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(9)
- AlpheusRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0An absolute unit of a story and I'm interested to see where he takes this. While I like the style of story I hope he doesnt go the a general route and comes up with a new direction for this story instead of one of the mass produced ones. So far he is making an interesting story that isn't seen much on this site. Being a writer myself( not on this site) I can honestly say from a professional standpoint this is very well written introducing little pieces of world building as time goes on and not cramming it down your throat, as well as never leting the story enter a lull that will loose the readers attention. If he can keep this up and make it novel length I would actually propose sending this to a publicist. Welp keep going at it my friend your doing great
- The Tishbite from TishbeRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0In the midst of the detritus found among webnovels, it is always pleasant to find one like Dragonfall: Soulborn.
Style and grammar are top notch, certainly around these parts. You can count on each chapter being thoroughly readable and intelligible.
The story matches the tags as advertised and has a good pace for building the reader's initiation in the world of the main character.
I find the character development to be realistic, lack of which is normally my first turn-off for a story. Further, the balance with support characters I find well done.
So, why five stars, you may ask? Do I find the story incapable of improvement? No, but I was never a teacher who refused to give 100%s on the bogus principle that "everything can be improved" (I was a teacher though). Of course everything finite can be improved–this isn't some Leibnitzian "best possible world," which is a manifest contradiction... Back to the point, Oddmar more than satisfies my expectations for a good story. I encourage you to read and see for yourself. I know that I will definitely be checking out his other work.
Surely I could say more to defend a five-star review, right? Yes, I could say more, but then I would be writing more than I would be reading, and I am here to read. You should read too. Why not start with Dragonfall: Soulborn? - TheBreakernewRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is really a very entertaining read. I've just finished reading up to Ch.31 and can say that the style, story, and character proggresion have all moved in positve entertaining ways. The grammar is also very good, and the author corrects mistakes pointed out to them.
- Jmes NortonRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I really enjoyed Dragonfall Enchantment, I've read it 3 times. I just started reading Soulborn and I am already hooked. I look forward to purchasing this book when it is published and dearly hope the author continues with the sequal to Enchantment.
I would also hope that he would take the time to create an Author page on Amazon to better let readers know who he is. I only happened upon this site after searching for him - OrphicleRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I am awed at the consistent high level of the writing. I read the whole thing in one day. It was amazing. Its seriously better than most of the official books on kindle. Thanks for your writing. It was wonderful! I would love to see a sequel. I enjoyed how there was good flow to all the characters.
- PterolycusRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is a good novel, it's hard to find books with a good plot line and grammer you don't have to correct every other sentence. You have done a good job of catching emotions and also making it to where it can be a while separate series despite it having another book.
- RationalMindRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Liked the story very much. Just release the stories a little faster.
- Heather EgglestonRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I've really enjoyed this story so far and look forward to reading the rest as it gets posted. The grammar and editing is well done, I've only seen a few errors and they don't detract from the story that much.
- kergothRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Still early days, but so far so good. I loved Dragonfall: Enchantment, so this bodes well for the future of this fiction. I'll be following it anxiously :)