Dragon, Silver Dragon; Revelations

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

MArienach

• And in the End
  Dec 31, 2017
• Mistake
  Dec 30, 2017
• The Dead World
  Dec 29, 2017
• All The Creatures
  Dec 28, 2017
• Surprise!
  Dec 27, 2017
• Elves and Dwarves
  Dec 27, 2017
• Castaways
  Dec 26, 2017
• The Winding Road
  Dec 24, 2017
• Together
  Dec 23, 2017
• And So It Begins
  Dec 23, 2017
• Gifts Given
  Dec 23, 2017
• The Name of the Game
  Dec 22, 2017
• Even the Gods
  Dec 22, 2017
• Awareness
  Dec 22, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(8)

• Mu'erRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I like this story, the prespective is new and has a lot of potential. I do hope that this doesn't become one of thos OP supercharacter creates utterly obedient benevolent civilisation. Not meaning to encroach on your creative line, but maybe a betrayal or fanaticism (early christianity style?) could make for a little more mid term story themes, with magic system exploration in the short term.
• GunysaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  One of the best stories I have read lately. I suggest you read the first novle.
• HIiAMLOGANRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  An incredibly enjoyable story. It was very interesting to see a near polar opposite from most other reincarnation type stories that ive read previously. Whereas most others start on the weak end with the protagonist gaining power, (most that ive read have them using control to gain power, then going for more power in general) this was the opposite, starting off with a massive amount of power, and having to figure out how to use it. Then there was the comedy! This story was one of the funniest things ive ever read.
• BoubouhRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Same style as the first story, so nothing to say there.
  About the story, it is the same goal, but bigger and with a bit different motivation. There is also some more mysteries in the plot. All in all, there are more interesting points. But some parts would need clarifications, as Michael and the other characters seem a bit too much accepting of all that happens (but it may be a point of the plot).
  Still some mistakes, but at least there aren't any big ones.
  Like I said before, the characters are following the flow a bit too much which makes it seems that they have little to no will and the side characters almost disapeared.
  The story still need more spacing between paragraphs.
  Sorry for the possible mistakes in the review.
• RoknarRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Woo hoo welcome back, so far this is as good as the first offering. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
• SlayterRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I read the whole thing in about 3 days and wow really you are an incredible author and your story started out confusing but Drew me in and just wow I loved it if you publish it in will buy the book and make my family read it this is a incredible satisfying read now to make my wife it must have had ha
• MadKingRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I need diffrent planes to be a part of this because hes a planer dragon not just a space dragon.
• ZabzablordRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  First of all, Revelations is not separated from the first DSD book. The author will, or so he says, make one book. I can only agree to that.
  This story is difficult to rate. It is difficult to rate because there is a gap between two important points that, for me, make a good story: the form and the plot.
  The form is very uneven. A good story must, with play on words and stylistic devices, tickle all of our senses and make our imagination run. It is strangely unbalanced in DSD: one place will be rich in details and the next will appear baren and dead to the reader. But that is not the main problem. The author can better himself and remember that no description is a filler.
  No for me the main problem lies within the intent carried by the text. It feels as if the author, while having a clear view of what he wants, fails to find the right words to convey it. The result is that, from geography to battle to reflexion, everything is a blurr. Like looking at a painting, understanding the overall meaning, but without being able to make out the details. Like the overuse of a shaky came in an action movie. And it links with the first point: this blurr could be focused by simply adding a more in-depth description (for a place for exemple), better wording (for inner monologue or dialogue) and attention paid to logical steps (i.e, for MC to be ambushed in a forest, he must first enter the forest. that's an exemple, not linked to DSD).
  BUT, is that a bad story? Well yes, because form does matter. Yet no, because I enjoyed the plot. It is quite vanilla in the first part (DSD) but thickens incredibly during the second (DSDR).
  The only aspect of the plot that made me seriously raise my right eyebrow is the mean to the goal and that leads me to the characters. The MC, who decides on the means (which is only fair, as he is the MC) is decently fleshed out. And... That's about it. All other individuals are indecently compliant, to a scheme that could be summed up in "Adam Smith conquers