dragon gamer
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
veteran is trapped in a RPG after being summoned from a virtual reality now with his equipment and skills he must survive in the world
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- dragonboy
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 46
- Views
- 3,150
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- zlightning123Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0This story starts out well, has a lot of potential and has a great premise. If I may make one suggestion: I’ve noticed that you’ve posted a lot of fanfics lately but have never gone over four chapters and left them unfinished. My advice to you is to choose a story and stick with it. No one wants to read the fanfics of a writer who every few days starts a new fanfiction and writes three or four chapters but quits afterwards to start a new one that he will give up on as well. My opinion is that among your stories, the three with best potential were this one, the op outsider from another world, and alpha. I advise you to choose one of these and stick with it.
- PikachuRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The story concept is good, but you need to get some more chapters at least once a week so that people can consider your story. This seems to have a lot of potential so I don't want it to go to waste.