Dragon Ball X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered]
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This is a story centered around a man named Luke who was coming from watching the New Dragonball Super Broly Movie. Sadly, Luke gets into a car accident, ending his life. Luke will be given a second chance of his choosing, meaning he can choose which world to reincarnate in. Anyone can probably guess what he will pick. He asked to be Goku and Raditz's brother but the one in between, so he is the middle brother now. Watch as Kayn(Luke) Rises to power against all the villains that invade the earth with the help of all the Z fighters and some extras who should have died in the main series or non-canon series.
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- Hiatus
- Author
- Prisoner Of TIme
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- 3.8/ 5.0
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- 147
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Community Reviews(5)
- Thomas WigginsRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Love dragonball fanfics, wish it was longer tho. Specially love the fact that he is brother to raditz and goku. will make it more interesting later. Its just a tiny bit weird when a 3 yar old (even tho he is older mentally) is hitting on older women
- flashmurder6666Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Spoiler: Spoiler
Its a good story just a bit fast paced but still acceptable - DacraunRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5I find your story to be of decent interest (up to Ch13 as of this review)
The big caveat for me would be the quality of the writing. Sometimes things are slightly confusing, and it is necessary to read a sentence or paragraph twice to grasp the full meaning of what you were trying to convey.
I'm sure with a little work, this could be quite a decent fan fiction. - Juan Jose Sanchez RojasRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5does anyone think of using a dragon ball or naruto system in a wuxia (xianxia) world?
- Talos01Royal Road★★★ 2.5Get better grammar and then you might have a good fanfic