A regular office worker dies and reincarnates into the body of a baby Raditz. As he is stuck living as the character he hates most he decides to put Raditz's wasted potential to good use, whilst at the same time forming an organisation that will change the universe as he knows it.

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NeydomusRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

i totally enjoyed it. too tired to do a full review though. giving 5 stars for originality.
for those fearing a long wait before he becomes strong(as is normal in dbz fanfics), have no fear. the guy becomes very strong quite quickly. i also really liked how when gravity training was no longer enough he went near a black hole to train. very original. though even the dumb saiyans thought it suicidal :D
its also nice that he's treating SSJ transformation as as trump card and doesnt neglect training his base form to the limit.

Rudi KhoerruddinRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Spoiler: Spoiler
I really appreciate your creativity. your story still have minus point but i know you will improve with time. I will wait, how you will make us hooked with your writing.

svelricRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

It's a good story, everything is well done, except the way the lines are separated, you need to work on that. But I recommend that story, to anyone who want to read a good DragonBall fan fiction, it's a must read .

Antel1904Royal Road

★★★★ 4.0

Excellent story, at the beginning I had trouble adapting to your style, but I'm glad I stayed, there's not many DBZ fics that have a bbunbof chapters and are good. The spaces between paragraphs and the line break between sentences is anoying but can still take it. There's a few grammar error here and there, nothing major. Overall, this great story has made me remember how much I like DBZ, tonight I'm going out to watch Belly's movie, so I can take a break from reading...(got to the last chapter :( )

TyckaRoyal Road

★★ 2.0

In the first chapters, this story got me, as the MC himself said: "Power is more important than lives of a family" but after that, he got kinder and kinder. He wen to namek just to let some random fat-ass to read all his memories from a previous life and this one. I mean wtf? revealing your biggets secret to random fat dude, why? So I just dropped after that sentence "I chose agianst my instict and let him read all my memories" basically this story not worth any attention I expected mature and power seeking MC, not idiot who spills secrets right and left.

dinodogst123Royal Road

★ 0.5

Couldn't even get through a single chapter. Every sentence is chopped in half and split among multiple paragraphs, which is possibly the worst formatting choice I've ever had to read.
As far as the story itself goes, the story seemed to be moving quite quickly and the characters didn't feel particularly fleshed out, so I lost interest in them wuickly

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