Dragon Ball, A True Coherent Fan-Fic

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Author: So I was writing and erasing every time I had a chapter for my other story, I felt it had something missing. So I decided to practice by doing a Fan Fic after reading some of them. Some of them almost made puke of how much they made me cringe. Now I'll make it justice my doing one. I don't have to create too deep of lore. I can just work around what's already there and fix some things I hated in the original work. Vegito being retcon. Launch being lost in limbo. No love for Tien Shinhan.

Synopsis:

I died and reincarnated in the Dragon Ball universe. This is how everything went down after was reborn.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2018

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3.9/ 5.0
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17,866

Chapters(10 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • TyckaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Yeah, I'm too tired with shitty fan fics, but I don't have talent in writing so I hope somebody would redo some of DBZ fan fic. But with anti hero lead or indifferent Mc. Because every DBZ fic I read have kind and naive Mc.. By the way good look with this.
  • NowGoWithTheFlowRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    I don't like how you made the power level system and at the start already putting in over powered characters that wasn't there in orignal story. Really 15,000 power we would have seen that in dbz. Why is he so weak he had so many years with 10x gravity also all sayins have to go on missions so when he got out of the pod he would have went on a mission. Sayins are fighters not mechanics if anyone found that mc learning other stuff besides fighting most likely would have died by freeza. As a reincarnator in dbz world i like to see mc using ki and not magic thats just me. Also feels like your rushing it, tell us more about his life on planet vegta also his time in the spaceship whats his daily routein what he study what he did for fun.
    I really like the system and how you reaincarnated one of the best. I just hate mc who gets a system that does everything for them and gives them everything they need and cheat powers just because, without the hard work for them.