Dragon Ascension

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Petty Officer First Class Justin Snow was on a mission to escort a high ranking civilian back to his home in Afghanistan. It was a simple mission, there wasn't even supposed to be any combat, but this mission would take away his life and give birth to a new one. God was deeply satisfied with the actions Justin took throughout his life, especially with the final bit of jumping on a grenade to save his squad. The phrase ""God loves the Troops!"" really wasn't exaggerated, actually it was an understatement! Having supreme power comes loneliness, and when one is lonely they look for a companion, God has chosen to watch over Justin in the new life he gave him in a new world filled with magic and adventure! Want to be like God? Then just watch as Justin explores his new world and ascends into Godhood as a dragon! In this world he will experience love, joy, anger, hatred and much much more!(This story has been dropped, you are welcome to read the first few chapters I have up, but there will not be any continuation.)

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: AspiringFrogman

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 418
Views: 100,527

Chapters(14 total)

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AbominableSnowmanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Although it is only 4 chapters in, i am thoroughly enjoying this work so far. Everything from the character description to the MC personality and backstory is perfect, lately i have been reading a lot of crap works with terrible grammar from non english speakers, but this author has such good spelling and grammar they could probably be a Literary Arts teacher if they tried. The only negatives i can think of so far would be the minor info dumping, but even that isn't all that bad with the way it is presented. I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work.
KholdanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far its one of the best starts ive read. The world is detailed, the MC is awesome and the humor is good. AND HE IS A F........ DRAGON :-) Nothing can beat a dragon :P
SobekRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Slowly got boring, but I believe that you can fix it.
^^^^^^ LOL somehow a fiction that has been out for 2 weeks has slowly gotten boring with only 10 chapters and no time to dev plot XD
TreyonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
You make really good use of incidents of his past life here, makes you look forward to whats going to happens next…
As for what will happen after they defeat the great calamity in 20 years, since its known that there are thousands of gods then you can expand things to other realms once the 4 grow powerful enough…. Like in the Novel “Until Death?” where the MC and the heroine starts as son and daughter of opposed kingdoms as prince and princess… they marry… things escalate and then they are dealing with a battle between god factions LOL… so in this case you can make them ascend to godhood and you can make the second ark about that… so then in a new ark you could have the 4 of them plus a girl or two for tyler XD and have them adventure other places.
Also be kind to poor tyler and get him a girl =P… MC already has 2 to deal with =P… a good contrast would be a shy dragon girl for tyler XD… would be fkng funny if his wife appears LOL since tyler stayed on earth until his 80+ im quite sure that he must have married... so having his wife appear would be funny, double funny if tyler too fears his wife =P... D D D DEAR? um um im happy to meet you a a a again... and then tyler gets hit while wife saying... thats all you gotta say to your dear wife after meeting her again in another life!? LOOL
It would be an awesome chapter to know how was the life of tyler and the twins on earth… i expect the twins on earth to be um? quite advanced since MC died in his 20+, never got a girlfriend (there has been no mention of him dying virgin but from the way he behaves its unlikely)… i wonder if MC wanted to go meet the twins after his military service and marry one of them… But tyler and the twins must have had a family and all that since at least tyler died of old age so we can expect the twins to have lived a full life with grandkids and all… so i guess that the twins will dominate the bed, they had a life time of sex…LOL… Poor MC XD-…..
You make it too that the twins never really marri
foufouu1Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
the best i have ever read so far !!!!!! I WANT MOORRRREEEEEEEE!!!
CreeperTheReaperRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
That's the Navy branch...also first class doesn't handle escort missions generally. If they do its usually highly dangerous.
Navy in particular wouldn't normally handle escort mission.
Usually left to the army, guard, or Airforce now and days.