Dragon?
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
As he looked at the lake he stared at himself. """"I'm a Dragon"""" he thought. Then he heard sounds of boots coming to a stop he turned around and saw himself looking at a group of armored humans.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Mature is Gore only.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- StandardJarl44
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 75
- Views
- 19,238
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- Dream45Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0i like the theme of the story , i don't really mind this because is the author first story ... and people is already trying to put him down (Vatan) like why XD? ... o well
keep it up can't wait to see how you improve - deathgearRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Love ur story but I only have two complain 1 you need to make the chapter longer and 2 taking too long to release the new chapter in know I’m being unreasonable just do it. I hate waiting even more when the story is good
- VatanRoyal Road★★ 1.5First of all the premise of the story is good its the execution that is lacking. Grammar needs to be fixed so that we know who is talking and to whom. A prologue is needed to explain how the MC ended up in his circumstance or a flashback in the first chapter. The story needs to slow down and there needs to be some word building so we know what the surroundings look like and can get a better picture. Also we need to establish the character personality and background either in the prologue/ flashback or in the first few chapters. Keep up the good work and I hope you continue this story.