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OwenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Well written, no mistakes I could find in punctuation and spelling which is rare xD good story so far we’ll worth a read
forgottendragon23Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Well written with a touch of love. This story has me hooked. The opening has me wanting to find out so much more about Echo's future. The other main characters are easily likeable and the author has done a good job in making them believable.
For punnctuation and grammar, I had a really hard time finding any mistakes and if there was a mistake, it was so small that you could easily read right over it without it being disruptive.
As for style, the author does an awesome job differentiating which character is speaking. The paragraphs and chapters are a reasonable length too and cut off at natural points to keep the story interesting. Each chapter leads further into the story without being a burden and I love the multiple perspectives. I wonder if we'll see other perspectives later on.
Now for the story... It's a solid read. As for chapter 14: Never Say Goodbye... It leaves me wanting so much more. The author has created a tale worth reading so far. I expect it will only get more epic as the protagonist gets stronger. The antagonist is a badass and not your generic cookie cutter bad guy which is a huge plus. He's got personality, a possible history with the main protagonists, and bouts of insane anger.