Draconic Overlord

Self-Published

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Description

Ever since she had been discovered as being a lesbian Yuki has been all alone. Her parents were disappointed and despised her. Her friends all abandoned her. Very quickly her personality turned cold and the only thing she had left was the immensely popular VRMMORPG Niflheim. However like they say all good things must come to an end.

In the last moments of Niflheim Yuki decided to stay till the end cherishing her memories, but what happens when the timer hits 0 and nothing changes?

Nothing changed right?

(Hiii Shard here sorry if your not fan of yuri/lesbian stories, but being a fan myself it's probably going to be 99% of my content! This novel has a lot of Futanari content. Thanks for reading my first piece of writing. Thanks for reading!)

image source: https://www.deviantart.com/inawong/art/Sindragosa-725696153

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Blood-Shard

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 853
Views: 173,920

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

Alexandra7001Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Amazing story! It has everything I wanted in a yuri story. If you are an overlord fan like I am, you’re going to be in love with this story too! ❤️
AmodockRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love it. The characters are well done and I can't wait to see how the story will go.
I just wish there was a definite posting schedule and came out more often.
F-rank HumanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Ok, let's be constructive and explain why it's so good. Or maybe not. If I get too lazy in the middle of writing this review, so be it!
So far not too much has been published yet but I think I get a general idea and the direction the story is taking. The review is made with CH 12 being the latest thus far.
The style is not bad. Not out of this world but it fits the overall theme and it's fun! Makes the story fun! And that's all that matters!
I'm NOT too attentive of a reader, so I may have missed some mistakes in grammar but so far there aren't any mistakes that stick out like sore thumbs to be noticed
Well, the storyline so far IS rather generic. I can probably count some 10 novels with pretty much the same overall plot so far of top of my head. It doesn't mean it's bad tho. There wouldn't be so many stories with the same plot otherwise.
The characters! The lovely yuri paradise that is made out of characters! How can you not love them?
A very enjoyable read to pass the time and get some smiles.
carrotst1cksRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Ecchi, fun, and interesting :) I don't like harems too much, but I certainly don't mind this one.
DumplingJrRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Spoiler: Spoiler
So far so good i love the concept almost as I love the anime/lightnovel its based off of *cough* Overlord *cough* I hope she continues the daily uploads and i cant wait to see where this goes
monitorman06Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
MORE MORE MORE I like story like this finally its hard to find women transported to another world thats a has a yuri tagged
SaltyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
so far so good, can't wait for the *cough* "plot"
CazzTeteRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Really good for now, nothing to say about the grammar, good description at good time.
Even if it Still à bit early to do à review (9chapter) I support the author
One HUGE bad point is the release rate
Anyway i recommend !
TanhaleviRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Characters and Story could be ok.
I would have given Style a 2 if not for the latest chapter.
Your writing was, after all, too simple.
I am not speaking of a clean style which favours effectiveness and clarity over eloquence, I am speaking about a shallow style, arid like a desert.
Let me be clear: it could simply be because you are not used to writing or you write whatever you feel it is ok without much more tought.
I am not saying it is bad, I am saying that you should grow, together with your story.
I believe a great influence on the past chapters were all the references you put, the tropes and the copied scenes you used as a skeleton.
Don't limit yourself to what you felt it was cool and to those scene you would have loved to see your characters in, so that they could have acted differently from the protagonists.
You can imagine, now, an entir world.
You can decide its common sense, its social structure, its laws, its dangers and so on.
Do they have a system? Do they use ki? Are they cultivators? How do magic work and what is its influence on the common people?
What does Yuki want? If she just wants to travel, which places are her favourites? She is OP, so she can go where she wants.
How do Gods see her presence in the world? Are there really Gods? Do they regularly interact with humans? Are they simply beings from a Higher Plane?
Yuki could also have read those books and seen those anime you watched. Who says that she could not be the one looking to copy those flags and situations?
Is she going to explain to her crew about her previous life? You have put it in the summary, but it has not appeared in the novel.
I am, without a doubt, rude and arrogant in writing you all of this, but it is just because I do not feel like it is so bad I would stop reading it now, but ai do not particularly feel like bookmarking it.
I would like for this novel and its author to grow.
ChechuRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Fair amateur start, flashy combat, OPMC. There were some plot holes but that’s to be expected for this sort of start. I would normally expect a story to grow from this that would require a bit of rewriting before publishing but there is potential here. I was excited for the worldbuilding that began happening in the last chapters. Only light sexual elements so far. Would love to see the author come back and give another go at writing for fun - either this or something new.