DoorMan (MCU SI)

Self-Published

Description

The tale of the Bearer of the Keys, the wielder of the Door Magic. Colin Baxter.

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Jamie_Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The premise is well written , the author fairly adept at writing, unlike most fanfics it’s readable. My main problem is the author is bogged down with to many ideas or concepts, eg. He’ll introduce something only to not bring it up again for a few chapters, while pretending it was never forgotten. A good example of this is Bruce Banner being on the mars base.
Another problem was the intro it was too forced, with very little actually being introduced, felt more like starting from chapter 6 or 8 then chapter 1.
The higher rating is because I don’t want to mess with the analytics, specially with so few reviews.
Per Te ViveboRoyal Road
★ 0.5
70 chapters in and author still keeps making mc more and more like a japanese mc who keeps getting force by women to do what they want. mc is now revealing more and more knowledge and his powers to shuri for no ef-ing reason at all. I still dont understand why author keeps showing us more of shuri when no one gives a flying f about her.