Distortion

Self-Published

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Description

This is going to be my first attempt at a story on this site. In advance, I would like to thank those of you taking the time to check it out. I hope you enjoy.

Actual Synopsis will be added upon me fleshing out my idea for the story.

This is all subject to heavy change as I feel the need to modify the story to fit the narrative I am going for.

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • EufuuRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Disclaimer: I am a friend of the author, and I am currently 4 chapters in. This review hopes to help you decide if you should give this story a chance. I'll revise my review as I continue reading!
    Any time I start a new story, I feel more skepticism than excitement. In the land of Tolkiens and Martins, it's hard to justify investing myself in a new fantasy setting. Leeze's book makes itself approachable, and I found myself wholly absorbed by chapter 3.
    I would describe it as a classic fantasy with an unfurling story. The overarching mystery is a great propellant for enjoying an admittedly slower pace while we get to know the characters. The ones in the spotlight are well crafted, captivating and portray a vulnerable relationship with themselves and others.
    There are also some great nods to the world building and the magic system so far. While I don't suspect these to be as detailed or deep as the titans of fantasy, they pique the curiosity and place me in that "imagine if I could do that" state of mind. If only reading could give me magic powers.
    Undoubtedly biased, but also strictly objective, I think there is a seed of great potential here. I am excited to voraciously dig into the rest and I sincerely hope you will join me on this journey!