Discovery of the Wand

Self-Published

Description

A cute marshmallow on a journey to stop a fire meets many challenges and a friend.

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Altair PolarisRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This may be the strangest thing I’ve ever read. Spoilers? A marshmallow goes on a mission to save marshmallow land from a fire started by an atomic bomb armed with a pretzel shaved off into a spear. Points for creativity, and there is enough humor in there I would not be surprised if it is a spoof on something particular (and is almost certainly a spoof on the hero troupe in general.)
Grammatically, I felt like I was reading Ulysses. It was very stream-of-consciousness style (although I wasn’t sure who the observer) but I like James Joyce so that didn’t particularly bother me.
It’s short - one chapter short - and gives a complete story are (perhaps a critique on books like mine which go forever.)
Anyway, I’m not sure how meta the author was trying to go, but I liked it so I figured I’d review it. It was oddly refreshing to read a story that ends.
RznRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This is a very strange concept, about a marshmallow that goes on a short journey to save the land from fire. It makes very little sense and is a bit of satire at the journey and hero tropes. Worth a quick read, but do not expect anything serious or deep from this. It is a curiosity at most and worth a laugh or two.