Discontinued (was fireblight)

Self-Published

Description

I don't want to delete because I enjoyed the comments but if you find this just know this is the outdated version of the story <3

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Lord TurtleRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The Good: This hits us right away, the world being presented is filled with mysteries and questions that get thrust into your head as you begin reading. The characters, some a little less developed than others but possibly just due to how new this story is; also leave us with more mysteries as they get introduced. What this culminates in is a fantastical story that is seeping with questions that you want to see anwsered and thus motivate a desire to keep reading. Overall I would defintely recommed picking this up.
The Bad (But not really just things to note really): Like I said, some apsects of the story could use more development, but thats obviously a question of just waiting for more chapters to release. Furthermore there are also some parts of the wider worldbuilding at large that don't make sense right now, but again thats more just information that would likely come as more content is released.
Overall: So far, so good.