Disciple of the Sword God

Self-Published

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Description

Two hundreds years ago humans,elves and velkins relied on sword techniques to fight monsters called Nestars. Since the creation of magic and guns swords are becoming less and less popular with humans,elves and velkins.Many years later a man called Xiles created a godlike sword skill called [Snow Blood Sword].He defeated everyone under the heavens with this sword skill and become the strongest man in the world.This novel follows his disciple who will eventually surpass him.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Terra

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 63
Views: 17,549

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

mephistotelesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
okey the history is fantastic and i need more. i need to know what he is going to do the nobles and about the challange of the strongest of the school
SilverfateRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
You need to work on your grammar. the story is good, but the bad grammar will be a large turn off for a lot of people. It shouldnt be a chore to try and understand what you are saying.
clouderbayRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Mr. Author your gonna need some touch ups here and there (Not hard to find if you look like in every damn chapter) The story itself is a first for me and bring's a fresh insight of fantasy, but their are a lot of plot hole's. The only ones i'm going to point out are the lack of backstory for the master of the main protagonist, and the main protagonist's master's master and how he found the insight of his sword art and the styles. he would then come to know and use. other than that your off to a good start just some plot hole to fill and I will change my overall score to a 4.5. later
Book CultivatorRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Style is ‘okay’… but very little ‘okay’
You ‘ate’ the background of the characters
Your ambient description is seriously bad
2.0/5.0
The story is ‘cool’…
2.5/5.0
The grammar is HORRIBLE
Pronouns:
The man who develop this skill set only have one disciple. > The man has
You switch tenses on the middle of the phrase:
Using two verbs:
He was also convinced that simplicity and speed are could triumph over everything.
And you forget the verbs phrases like:
“I going roast some birds today” > I am going to…
Switching verb for noum ( I do not want to point it because I will have to read again :v )
“It smells good. I hope its taste even better.” > it tastes
0.5/5.0
The characters are… well… I will just judge from the level of OPness because you ATE the background of the characters and created a halfassed character
3.0/5.0
OVERALL SCORE: 2.0
Before you say that I’m sort of bullying you, I have to say that I’m doing an extremely professional review and pointing your errors