Disarmed

Self-Published

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Description

Part 1 of 3 books in the series.

Sheeva Julesis searching forLlyud Halma, a sadistic murderer who has continually given her the slip more times than she cares to admit. Determined, she winds up in the city of Roussell where she meets new allies and friends to aid her.Tazaro Chorea,a creative woodworker with a penchant for wacky inventions, is the first in her new group of friends, though it is Tazaro's mother who gives Sheeva comfort and solace long-forgotten. When she is taken, Sheeva further begins to unravel the mystery surrounding the elusive, nefarious Llyud--and of the man behind the scenes. With the conspiracy and the looming threat they can't ignore, Sheeva and Tazaro must learn to forgive, trust, and lean on one another as they maneuver the minefield of traps and nasty schemes left behind in their target's wake.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: SheevaK1331

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 5,554

Chapters(24 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Jerome (Jdreams)Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story has captivated me with its rich world-building, complex characters, and engaging plot. The writing is immersive, and the author has a talent for crafting vivid descriptions that transport readers to the world of Vivroa.
Sheeva, is a compelling and multifaceted character. Her backstory is tragic, but it's handled with care and sensitivity. Her growth and development throughout the story are fascinating to witness, and her interactions with other characters are nuanced and believable.
Tazaro is an excellent and his dynamic with Sheeva is adorable and heartwarming. His passion for inventing and his kindness towards Sheeva are endearing, and I love how he's starting to come out of his shell.
The world-building is detailed and rich, with a deep history that adds depth to the story. The magic system is intriguing, and I appreciate how it's woven into the narrative without overwhelming the reader.
The pacing is well-balanced, with a mix of action, dialogue, and introspection. The story moves at a steady clip, and I'm invested in it.
One of the standout aspects is the author's use of language. The writing is lyrical and evocative, with a clear attention to detail. The dialogue is natural and authentic, and the characters' voices are distinct and consistent.
Rich world-building and immersive setting
Complex and nuanced characters
Engaging plot with a good balance of action and introspection
Excellent dialogue and character interactions
Beautiful writing with a clear attention to detail
This story is a delight to read, and I'm excited to read. With its strong characters, engaging plot, and rich world-building, it's a must-read for fans of fantasy and adventure. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
I strongly recommend If you enjoy:
Complex characters and character development
Rich world-building and immersive settings
Fantasy and adventure with a focus on character growth
Beautiful writing and engaging dialogue
Then you'll likely love this story. Give it a tr
MarskidrisRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story follows Sheeva as she cases the murderer of her spoiler. In doing so she meets several promising characters like Tarazo, his mother, and others.
Style: I would definitely say the style is unique Al tho I’ve read revenge stories Disarmed is unique in the way the tale is told. The world is rich and seems like a mix between reality mix with magic and more. It’s not set in the modern day environment but it does hold some values that could be considered modern.
Story: the story is RICH. The world, characters, and even terms are unique to the world and truly takes on a fantasy setting. Be warned the chapters are quite long but detailed in a way that gives you a picture of what is going on and who the characters are.
Grammar: I didn’t find errors so I have no complaints.
Character Score: Sheeva is definitely not a damsel in distress but she does seem to have some rash tendencies I believe keeps her human. Her time helping orphans and more even at her expanse shows her willingness for compassion and perhaps companionship. Perhaps it stems from her SPOILER being cut short. Over all I like her character but I feel like she lacks a certain passion for quest.
Overall: Overall I gave 5 stars as although I had a few detractors from personal opinion the story is still well written and has its own unique charm.