Ding: An SCP Tale
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Based on events from the game "SCP: Secret Laboratory", "Ding" is the story of research scientist Jonathan. Taking place during a containment breach, Jon's story is told in a sequence of flashbacks as he guards the facility's nuclear warhead room. Will Jon be able to make the ultimate sacrifice in time, or will all his struggles be in vain?
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- PdW2kX
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 610
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Grey CardinalRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0A great read. The story follows a silly poindexter who doesn't know what it feels like to have a hole in him, and really likes the sound of 'ding'ing, so much so that he'd die to hear it. I don't know what I'm on about. Apparently I need 200 characters to submit this so I thought I'd try being funny, but I failed miserably.
The characters were well-developed for a short-story equivalent to 2-3 chapters in an ordinary story. Grammar was good, I didn't notice anything bad. The whole 'ding' thing helped with the flow. Going to be honest, I'm talking out of my arse, I don't know much about writing and how to give good feedback. All that I know is that I enjoyed the story, and I guess that's all that matters.
I hope you write a story about a scientist who doesn't die, it'd be interesting to follow someone as they life their life working for the SCP Foundation. But this is just me pushing what I want onto you. What I really want, however, is to be able to submit this review, which apparently STILL hasn't reached 200 characters! Oh wait, it wants me to write 200 WORDS!? Crazy... crazy. Time to click the create button again to test if I've reached it yet!
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