Dimensional Paradise

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

Jke

• Chapter 147 – Interlude: Press Conference
  Dec 8, 2019
• Chapter 146 – Interlude: The Shadow and the Nun
  Dec 8, 2019
• Chapter 145 – The Fate of the Phoenix (2)
  Dec 7, 2019
• Chapter 144 – The Fate of the Phoenix (1)
  Dec 6, 2019
• Chapter 143 – Ominous Clouds
  Dec 5, 2019
• Chapter 142 – Alice Appears Again
  Dec 4, 2019
• Chapter 141 – Mana, Body, Image, Experience, and Luck
  Dec 4, 2019
• Chapter 140 – A Treasure, A Calamity
  Dec 2, 2019
• Chapter 139 – Forming a Team
  Dec 2, 2019
• Chapter 138 – Game End
  Dec 1, 2019
• Chapter 137 – Dream
  Dec 1, 2019
• Chapter 136 – Power (4)
  Nov 30, 2019
• Chapter 135 – Power (3)
  Nov 29, 2019
• Chapter 134 – Power (2)
  Nov 28, 2019
• Chapter 133 – Power (1)
  Nov 24, 2019
• Chapter 132 – Explosion
  Nov 23, 2019
• Chapter 131 – Turned into Lightning (2)
  Nov 21, 2019
• Chapter 130 – Turned Into Lightning (1)
  Nov 20, 2019
• Chapter 129 – Pursuit (4)
  Nov 19, 2019
• Chapter 128 – Pursuit (3)
  Nov 19, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• GisorelRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Now we're talking!
  Now that ch.80 is out, and we even have a few extras I guess we can say something on this book.
  The read was excellent, and I’m sure that this book is one that I can support with a amazon purchase without worrying, thing that only happened once before.
  about the book? well....
  first off, won’t go in expecting fast world building or fast character building or some random action scene for the sake of views/ word count.
  At least for now the author made a great job doing everything as a pack, he won't take 5 to 10 chapters to do one thing, but will take 30 or more to set a few things at the same time, and if you ask me if it works, it sure does!
  I’m not telling you that is a slow read, is definitely not, it just takes more than a chapter to someone fully appears or set himself/herself/itself (multiple options intended) on the world.
  The workaround with the "little girl" was really interesting and I’m sure it’s not over, a few pieces are missing, but they’re probably in place already on future chapters.
  TL:DR :
  Excellent story, but you need some time to get used to it.
  Well built, good length to the chapters and good release schedule. the world, characters and events are built and happen at the same time, so don't expect to see a new character fully made in 10 chapters, but expect a event, a character and a piece of the world to be solidified in 30 ch. or so
  word for the author:
  Keep the good work, sometimes things will happen, setbacks and trolls are more common them most people think.
  If I could suggest, keeping somethings hidden is good only up to some point, or if you’re trying to go some Sherlock Holmes style, that is also good to be honest, just try not to mix them up too much.
  About commas and other things, don’t worry too much about that, use them try to abuse them, just don’t flood.
  About names, and things that can’t be changed I would recommend a public or private Index of names, things, and general information that can’t be changed on a whim
• zmikezRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I liked the premise, I'll most likely come back and attempt this story later, just slogged through 3 different stories with subpar grammar. This one doesn't seem nearly as bad as a 30 chapter one I just finished binge-reading. The most grating is the use of  multiple plurals back to back. Most are easy to decipher like 5 men teams would be 5 teams consisting of men. 5 man teams would be teams consisting of 5 men each and just reading through the chapter will usually straighten up any ambiguity.
  That being said, having to decipher meaning from context isn't something I want to do often if I'm reading for pleasure. Immersion is being broken too consistently.
• Nomad1791Royal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  As of chapter 40
  Story: a deminsion of Earth is pulled into a death game where you need to fight and pass to survive.
  The good: I enjoy the story's world/setting. System is a little wonky but it works.
  Side characters/ alternative main are solid and enjoyable.
  Story is readable Grammer and sentence structure isn't so bad you can't get through it.
  Style: developing.
  The bad:
  Mc is trash and anyone from his version of Earth is trash. I'd seriously put money on almost anyone else winning a death match with the mc if his magical plot armor was taken away.
  Story: has some kinks the system seems to contridict itself where you are put into a death game because there's a hidden reason for it and they even give you weapons that are basically as useful as a passing fart.
  Style: author is in the process of developing one I think so growing issues.
  Grammer: there isn't a single chapter without a mistake and poor sentence structure. It's not enough to keep you from understanding it's just jaring at times.
  Overall: could use editors and a re-write but it's good for someone just starting out. Dont stop writing you have potential.
• J GuilhermeRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Read until the end of first volume.
  "Struggle" is the tone of the narrative and the author wants to imprint that in every moment, as form of suspense, tension in the action scenes and character development. And that's a problem for me.
  For the sake of the aforementioned element the MC becomes a blabbering fool incapable of simple deductions. For instance, "ice cold woman" explain him about something akin to magic, then the MC goes about a rollercoaster of emotion and thoughts about how it should be impossible, then in the next chapter he sees someone doing a spell and he goes through that avenue again.
  In suffice, even after some world building development, MC is repeatedly portrayed as a blind man walking into a gunfire, so his survival sounds like and it's plot armor.
  Good enough if you're seeking some tense moments, but everything else in the story is paying the price for it.
• The Gray witnessRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Interesting story, great potential, sentence structure and grammar is painful to look at. The story style is over used, and you can see the plot coming from a mile away. The characters are badly developed and plain, the mc has more plot armor then most op/godlike stories, author needs a lot of experience, an editor, and some goddamn English lessons. Noo offence, but it's a bit hard to read smoothly.
• SevenShadeRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  Style is just 2 star cause the setting is like ARENA , TERROR INFINITY and ect...
  Story score is so-so ... cause of a simple logical reasoning like whats the most dangerous bout team fight? Ofcourse its being a scout ! And the MC got a ride with a woman experiencing some nonesense like being ignore while the MChisterically warn her of a beast ! Then later advising him of rules like being alert?! Are u nuts woman?! No ! Because of author a plot like that happen !
  GRAMMAR is only 3 star because the authro lacks punctuation ! Like comma...u will see it when u read it .. go ...
  If its the authors first time them im his/her 1st blood !!!  Not bad trying BUT pls ! Review your work and plan ahead the plot before and after  writing !!!