Dimensional Exchange Program
Self-Published
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Description
This is the story of Chaos, and Ears. Told from two different worlds. One of Magic, and Chaos. The other is the modern world. Sci-fi and Fantasy collide in this exciting 2-for-1 story. Will Chaos be able to piece his broken mind back together, while at the same time surviving in the magical world of Allukar? Will Ears find a way to understand his self, while trying to survive in the rapidly advancing modern world? Yoou'll have to read to find out...l
Book is now being sold on Amazon....so the book will not be able to be read on RRL...THANK YOU FOR ALL THE SUPPORT...
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Lord
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- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 20
- Views
- 608
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- IsUnavailableRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I promised a review on chapter 10 and I am here to deliver.
Style: this story comes of as both playful and at times dark. I have seen several fictions on this site attempt this mix but it is hard to pull off. This is one of the few stories that has managed to pull it off. Right now the story is more playful/funny than dark, but you cannot complete discount it. In the first few chapters the story seems like it will be just another one of the many transported to another world stories, but as it continues it becomes more and more distinct making it worth a read. Although not perfect with more practice and time I expect this to improve. For a first story it is definitely one of the better ones on this site.
Story: The story so far has been interesting and not very predictable (I think this is a trait that comes naturally to the author) It also has 2 distinct story worlds. What initially drew me to this story was the perspective of Ears who comes to earth. It was a nice counter point to all the stories on the sight who do human to another world. This does not mean, however that Chaos from earths side of the story is not good, it also distinguishes itself with an MC that is what his name proclaims him to be CHAOS. It has surprised me how different the two perspective actually are. Right now it seems like the two MC's are going in vastly different directions and I like that. Just like the intro says you are getting two stories in one. I hope Lord is able to keep up with making the two sides of this story distinct because as It is one of the reasons I have been enjoying this so much. One of the main difficulties he will have with this though is keeping the world (or multiverse in this case) setting together into one cohesive story where they are still related, but are each distinct in their own way. So far he has done great and I am looking forward to see where he goes with it.
Grammar: So far (and thankfully) I have seen no real major error in grammar or at the very least - aisenfield-kunRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0also, take my 5 star. you probably deserved it