Diabolic Gamer
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Wilson Ponteverde is a perfect husband material that any girls ever wanted; Gorgeous, hard working person, come from a wealthy household. But he's no perfect, like others he's imperfect.Due to his curiosity of the so called World of Savage Online, a VRMMORPG game, Wilson decided to play with it. Not wanting to attract attention, Wilson came up an idea that no person would even think he's a sole heir of Ponteverde Group.And that's how the story start.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- SorceressPrincess
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 82
- Views
- 23,632
Chapters(10 total)
- Chapter 10: Why, Hello Teddy?Oct 2, 2015
- Chapter 9: Call me MamaSep 29, 2015
- Chapter 8: Unleash the fury...boar?Sep 27, 2015
- Chapter 7: Unknown LetterSep 25, 2015
- Chapter 6: Tom and JerrySep 21, 2015
- Chapter 5: Hairy-scalelessSep 19, 2015
- Chapter 4: The Art of DeceptionSep 17, 2015
- Chapter 3: Is Your Butt Big and Wide?Sep 16, 2015
- Chapter 2: Special RequestSep 15, 2015
- Chapter 1: Husband MaterialSep 14, 2015
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Community Reviews(1)
- phalliciesRoyal Road★★ 2.0Well, the advanced review i guess speaks for itself.
style- okay
story-because of grammar i couldn’t even begin to read the story without stopping and writing this review after 2 paragraphs
grammar-this is where you lost me within the first 2 paragraphs, you really need someone to proof read and correct a lot of the grammar mistakes. Having good grammar really makes or breaks stories.
character-similar to story, but being lenient as i haven’t read much.
Overall, I’m not trying to be mean, just honest, fix up the grammar and this is easily a 4 star or higher story.