Dexs/ Clairs Adventure (Completed)

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Description

I was a normal pupil and lived my daily live with school and light novels as well as a couple of games. I often had the dream of forsaking my world and living in a new world with magic and monster. And after a normal day it happened.... Well yeah, hi this is my first story and I´m extremely inexperienced, so please help me with suggestions in the comment section. The MC is going to be OP and will have a few screws loose. He is not good, but will do good deeds, if he sees them necessary. The story will have sexual contents in booth ways(normal and lesbian) and there will be violence(torture, gore, slave abuse and so on). The inspiration for this story lies in many, many other stories. For example Death March kara Hajimaru Isekai Kyousoukyoku, Tate No Yuusha No Nariagari, Mondaiji-tachi ga isekai kara kuru soudesu yo and many others.

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Status: Completed
Year: 2015
Author: Kestix

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

Briansoh71Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Can i ask is what is the frequency of the update as you know what makes most readers drop series is due to the lack of update or too long a break inbetween chapters.The story is great and all but it will not work out if there are nothing to read no matter how great it is.English and grammer mistakes are common and all but with the more proper use of english you can draw out more of the story potential and emotion.
No-One-SpecialRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I really enjoy this story. It's relaxing so to speak and the mc is funny.
fanvaronRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I'm really impressed how you managed to keep this story alive and going, it's one if the "wish fulfillment op character can do everything" stories, but unlike many other of that category you kept your story going and even interesting, it's funny how you manage to write interesting chapters without a real goal, enemy or even challenge, I must say I'm impressed.
I really find it funny to see authors use german as the "mystical foreign" language, since in my opinion (as a german myself) if you understand it, it does not sound nearly as majestic as in other languages or even English XD. But I find it especially funny how you use it for just everything from simple common to the old and forgotten magic language.
Your use of ähm is also rather funny.
DriedSquidRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Grammar: You can see mistakes on every chapterStory: Really interesting for an overpowered mcCharacters: Liked their background and their hardshipsOnly thing I didn’t like is that the MC was a male but rarely transforms into a male. Give Dex more screen time and Lilia momentsOverall I like it. More chapters are welcome
GlendiosRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
A rather interesting story with a fun cast. MC is an interesting character, and the way she acts is rather entertaining and quite amusing. OP MC plot is executed nicely, and most enemies that are crushed don't overstay their welcome, and they get their comuppence nicely. Fluff was fluffy when it appeared, but it was not too indulgent. though I would have preferred a bit of struggle for the MC, but as a wish fulfillment story, this is a rather good one.
KalariRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I like it, but the grammar makes it hard to give a 5 star rating.
Other than that I don't really have much to complain about here.
NyururinRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
No matter how good your story it’s hard to appreciate it when you can’t even understand please improve your grammar -.-
TheFreakRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I found the story okay, but often mindless and even annoying sometimes. Regarding grammar it reminds me of "leet speech" from back in day, it feels like the author can write english just fine, but isn't bothered enough to check his spelling. For characters...well it's like the story, quite mindless and let's not forget that the MC is a total sociopath.
It's like the author took every part I find annoying with OP main characters and added it into one person, it's interesting but be prepared to be annoyed.
Randomer47Royal Road
★★ 2.0
I really enjoyed this book for its carefree experience of an overpowered MC through a fantasy world basically enjoying their new life as they wished until the cannabilism started and yes I know the MC is technically a elf/dragon like species so eating humans is not classified as cannabilism but for someone who retains their human memories to casually eat human children is disturbing especially when it was done without reason as the mc wasn't starving or forcibly made to do horrible stuff to save their life, instead they just casually ate a human boy (has to apparently be under 10 years old) and then when the MC's HUMAN friend was summoned over to this world and later joined the MC one of the first things they did was bragging about eating a human and they killed and ate another another human boy together which was CANNABILISM, then near the end of the book the MC went to a demon farm which was raising "human cattle" and after eating a human meal was praised by the demons for being open minded about how they don't see much wrong with the humans who were raised to behave like farm animals with the females being made to birth every 6 months (apparently a mutation that allowed this particular group of humans to be considered prized animals) and males killed young for meat where the MC was interested in having their own ranch
i just don't get it author, why did you forcibly insert a disturbing and unnecessary factor to your book 😰
TheLeakingPenRoyal Road
★ 0.5
I read the first three chapters, and then jumped to near the end to see if it gets better.
It doesn't. The writing is sloppy and piecemeal. It feels like you're listening to a 3rd grader try and tell you a story from a tv show they watched, only less coherent. After slogging through this pile, my brain hurts.