Devil Cultivator in an Ability User World

Self-Published

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Description

Lu Shu was a Devil Cultivator who by purely relying on his own strength and by overcoming countless obstacles, he reached the tribulation all Devil Cultivators must pass to become immortal, the "Death Tribulation", but when the last bolt was about to come down and he was about to achieve immortality he...! Died. Yes, the strongest man in all of Artronia, suddenly died while he was in a Tribulation.

Little did Lu Shu know that he was incredibly "lucky" and was chosen by a council Gods to reincarnate into a world of random choosing and it just so happened to be an Ability User World and in this world, he'll thrive once more and become the Devil King just like in his last life.

Disclaimer: I do not own the cover photo and if you are the one who owns it and do not want me to use it, pm me and I'll remove it.

Also this is my first novel, I wanna put all the ideas in my head into an actual story so I thought I'd give it a go, constructive criticism is welcome as long as it's helpful.

P.s I'm not doing a prologue mainly because all you need to know about how he died is in the Synopsis, I might do a chapter with the council of God's if people want it.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: IReadBooksForALiving

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 1,236
Views: 101,182

Chapters(25 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

Bhelliom RahlRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like the idea of the story and I have been enjoying how the story is progressing.
I would recommend giving it a read.
patey18Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Spoiler: Spoiler
iiPandaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I don't normally do this type of thing but man I can't get enough of this story. I really enjoy your work!
rhinoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
the story is good but there still some small grammar mistake
you need to give more External description and Emotions
don't afraid to give enter so your reader can have a breath
the last thing I want to tell you is to Increase the size of the letters by one it make easier to read
I like your story it has very interesting idea
DarquesseRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Overall a good story. Fairly typical strong badass character, a bit simple, but it works for the story.
Minor grammars error common, but do not interfere with your ability to read the story.
HeylinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Has some potential. For now i will leave 4,5 Stars.
deadimpRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I really like the story and enjoy where the story is going there are just a few parts that feel rushed and the begining could use a rewrite but the overall story is a great idea.
really enjo how the devil cultivation is worked into the ability world and how there are others with the special bodies like his.
but i wont really complain i really enjoyed the story so far will carry on reading it or reread it if it is rewritten either way.
amazorRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I like the book right now, you know with 12 pages and two chapters. Sounds like a good idea so I thought I ought to show some support!
Went downhill and is now on hiatus
YesorNoRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Reviewed at CH 12
I remember spending hours on my character creation screen in Skyrim. While not much is known about the character's deeds, its quite fun imagining what he CAN do given his abilities.
That's all you've had time to write till now: A Character Creation Menu [Story Version]
What I cut the star for is that you get incredibly lazy sometimes and post the appearances of characters rather than weaving it into your story. Otherwise, its a fun read considering what it is.
Edit.
Progressively horrible female characters whose only purpose in life is to swoon over the MC.
GrayshadeRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Too many clichés and even then, they're nor written in an interesting way.
MC becomes OP too fast, at 10 years old. No one is second guessing how he's getting strong so fast. His mother basically ignores when he grows for 10 cm in one day.