Descendant of Dawn

Self-Published

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Description

Mary was born with immense magical talent, but abandoned at the door of an orphanage for reasons she can't understand. When fortune shines her way she sets out on a quest to see the world and discover her origins.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
230
Views
134,665

Chapters(49 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • AristanaeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A great story with a fleshed out magical system and a very relateable protagonist. It flows well and has few mistakes. All characters has depth to them even the rivals/enemies. All in all it is an enjoyable read and I hope the rewrite will be just as great.
  • DartmorinRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    A good story marred a bit by the inexperience of the author. It is nothing exceptional, but perfectly fine, acceptable writing. Grammar is a bit of an issue, but it certainly isn't "absolutely FULL gramatical of mistakes"(sic) like PRIMALSHADOW says, as well as flow, but not to the point of true annoyance. The main character is likeable and the enemies understandable.  The combat scenes are interesting, and the world building is adequate, but strange in parts.
  • VoidEaterRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Really good story. The prologue is very well written. Slow pace but it's okay. Some fractured grammar here and there but it's bearable. Overall, I really like this novel.
  • PrimalShadowRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    The worldbuilding in this story had some promise, but 42 chapters in, I couldn't bare reading the writing here any more. For one thing, it is absolutely FULL gramatical of mistakes.
    Also, while this is a more subjective point, I find the flow of the writing to be stilted and uncomfortable.