Descendant of Dawn
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Mary was born with immense magical talent, but abandoned at the door of an orphanage for reasons she can't understand. When fortune shines her way she sets out on a quest to see the world and discover her origins.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Irrelevant
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 230
- Views
- 134,665
Chapters(49 total)
- RewriteJun 2, 2019
- Chapter 48Nov 12, 2018
- Chapter 47Oct 15, 2018
- Chapter 46Sep 16, 2018
- Chapter 45Aug 13, 2018
- Chapter 44Jul 28, 2018
- Chapter 43Jul 18, 2018
- Chapter 42Jul 10, 2018
- Chapter 41Jul 6, 2018
- Chapter 40Jul 2, 2018
- Chapter 39Jun 28, 2018
- Chapter 38Jun 24, 2018
- Chapter 37Jun 20, 2018
- Chapter 36Jun 16, 2018
- Chapter 35Jun 12, 2018
- Chapter 34Jun 8, 2018
- Chapter 33Jun 4, 2018
- Chapter 32Jun 1, 2018
- Chapter 31May 31, 2018
- Chapter 30May 27, 2018
Reviews
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Community Reviews(4)
- AristanaeRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0A great story with a fleshed out magical system and a very relateable protagonist. It flows well and has few mistakes. All characters has depth to them even the rivals/enemies. All in all it is an enjoyable read and I hope the rewrite will be just as great.
- DartmorinRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5A good story marred a bit by the inexperience of the author. It is nothing exceptional, but perfectly fine, acceptable writing. Grammar is a bit of an issue, but it certainly isn't "absolutely FULL gramatical of mistakes"(sic) like PRIMALSHADOW says, as well as flow, but not to the point of true annoyance. The main character is likeable and the enemies understandable. The combat scenes are interesting, and the world building is adequate, but strange in parts.
- VoidEaterRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Really good story. The prologue is very well written. Slow pace but it's okay. Some fractured grammar here and there but it's bearable. Overall, I really like this novel.
- PrimalShadowRoyal Road★★★ 2.5The worldbuilding in this story had some promise, but 42 chapters in, I couldn't bare reading the writing here any more. For one thing, it is absolutely FULL gramatical of mistakes.
Also, while this is a more subjective point, I find the flow of the writing to be stilted and uncomfortable.