Demon Prince Familiar

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

underhanded

• Chapter 13: Acting
  Oct 24, 2015
• Chapter 12: Logan
  Oct 20, 2015
• Chapter 11: Reminiscing the past
  Oct 18, 2015
• Chapter 10: Trembling multiverse
  Oct 16, 2015
• Chapter 9: Paradise Island Academy
  Oct 16, 2015
• Chapter 8: Their money, my dinner
  Oct 14, 2015
• Chapter 7: Lineage
  Oct 13, 2015
• Chapter 6: The Fight
  Oct 12, 2015
• Chapter 5: Demon mode
  Oct 11, 2015
• Chapter 4: Matters to discuss = useless talk?
  Oct 10, 2015
• Chapter 3: Intense stare
  Oct 8, 2015
• Chapter 2 Becoming a familiar
  Oct 7, 2015
• Chapter 1 Demon prince
  Oct 6, 2015
• 1. Prologue (edited)
  Oct 5, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• ConviterRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  So far it seems interesting keeep up the good work
• SilverTongueRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  had not laugh like this for a while now...
  ur fic is refreshing, a saint turn to a demon..
  and as a saint he was noble and pure....
  while as a demon his completely opposite to his former self
  pretty good.... LOVE IT.... KEEP IT UP...
  CUZ IT IS GREAT AND IT IS WORTH THE READ
• aattssRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Huh. What do I think...
  The first chapter was bad. I'm assuming that those were typos rather than you not knowing how to spell. But the later chapters mostly had good spelling, which means you're better than most people on this site in that particular area.
  The summoning seems like an excuse to get the protagonist hooked up with a new harem member and involved with a plot. It also establishes the protagonist's motivations that the only reason he's involved in the plot is because of "boredom".
  Some things, like spending a chapter on the protagonist staring at someone's butt, are sort of boring to read.
  And on that subject, none of the characters are really... likeable? Interesting? I especially feel that Anna is plain. Pairing a protagonist with multiple women is sort of pointless when you can't even make one women feel like a person.
  Reading about the different circles of mages made me feel like I was reading a Wuxia/Xianxia fic. Not that that's a bad thing inherently, but I somehow feel like adding Immortals... I don't feel like it meshes well with the fic.
  I would recommend reading more fanfiction. Eventually you'll become aware of Sturgeon's Law and become more aware of the differences between good and bad fanfiction. Though since I don't write fanfiction myself, my advice might not be that helpful.