Democracy in Cultivation World
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Description
Our MC pious prayers finally paid off, he was summoned by the overseer granting his wishes, no light comes in as he opened his eyes, he found himself in the darkness. Just as he caught his breath to start his journey, his way in cultivation was blocked.
Pissed off, he can't let himself thread a life of abstinence again, having no strings attached in this world he decided to raise the stakes, he gonna introduce democracy!Can he change the course of history? or would his ideas be lost in the thread of time, buried along with him into oblivion?------------------------------------
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Commoner
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 20
- Views
- 41,620
Chapters(35 total)
- Shady BusinessFeb 17, 2020
- 34 - More EnemiesFeb 10, 2020
- 33 - The Ancestor ClawFeb 4, 2020
- 32 - Blood DebtJan 31, 2020
- 31 - The TrialJan 27, 2020
- 30 - DefianceJan 24, 2020
- 29 - The ExaminationJan 19, 2020
- 28 - The SchoolJan 16, 2020
- 27 - The Cloud Temple DiscipleJan 13, 2020
- 26 - The Divine Lotus CityJan 7, 2020
- 25 - ResolveJan 3, 2020
- 24 - Change of HeartDec 29, 2019
- 23 - Test the water backDec 25, 2019
- 22 - Secure the New BaseDec 22, 2019
- 21 - Foreboding GroundsDec 15, 2019
- 20 - Go our separate waysDec 11, 2019
- 19 - Teemao's FateDec 8, 2019
- 18 - The Play Of DestinyDec 5, 2019
- 17 - Danger outsideDec 3, 2019
- 16 - EquilibriumNov 30, 2019
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Community Reviews(4)
- Litrpg101Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0I can't read your first paragraph without shrieking in horror. Not enough commas.
- CalaventeRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5seriously, the setting is great, and the MC never entered into any coma .... :p
(and first paragraph seems ok to me... to each his own)
I like the setting and the ideas behind the events that the MC encounters.
I found here the best "logical" explanation/justification about the body-reinforcement stages !!!! (even if I'm not an exhaustive reader of all xianxia of RR... so take it with a grain of salt)
the MC is very rational, but with enough emotion and quick (not-smart-enough) judgement that he appears realistic.
The MC has no OP power, a barely-useful system to help him, and being reincarnated in the body of a victime of a succession feud. But he manages to make the most out of what he has, use the tools available to their outmost... and tries to "fit in".
The only drawback to the story is that the Author doesn't seem to be native english speaker , and it shows.
Early chapters have typos, and "sentences-no-english-native-would-write-like-that", but the meaning are clear... and it doesn't bother much the reading (especially as the later chapters show real improvement (early chapters have 2 star in grammar, later have 3.5-4 stars, depending on chapter) !!!! ). At most it's like having a friend that speaks "funny", or with an accent.
a few "?" are missing here and there (especially when mixing up description and internal dialogue) - SmartassApeRoyal Road★★ 2.0I can't read your first paragraph without shrieking in horror. Too many commas.
- Ult the DreamerRoyal Road★★ 2.0The story has potential. The character is hit and miss. The grammar and spelling is a distinct demerit. The logic doesn't really track well though.
It's an ok cultivation comedy if you can tolerate the grammar, but it's definitely a rough amateur work that needs cleaning up.
With the hiatus it's not really worth the investment of time.