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LordofKaizen

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Community Reviews(2)

• TheEpicReaderRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Okay, although it's still too soon to say for sure (thats why I said please don't mess this up), I'm willing to leave a review to guide other potential readers.
  Style: The author blends in a mix of hard and easy words to give an overall easy to read but in depth reading experience. You can tell that there the author isn't lacking in word power, however I feel like he/she/them could improve on this aspect. There isn't really anything unique about the way the story is portrayed, but it's pretty good for now since the novel is still progressing.
  Story: To be honest I've read a lot of novels from the VRMMO trope, and so far this story seems to fit most of them. I'm not sure if thats a bad thing or a good thing. But I can say this, the concept of there being a classless player and the way he ended up being said character was interestingly portrayed by the author, its something new and refreshing.
  Grammar: The grammar used by the author is pretty good, in the sense that it is very easy to read. There aren't any silly errors that destroy the whole experience. I've had times where I couldn't properly get emmersed into a book because of slight errors, but I was happy with this book so far.
  Characters: Since this review is being written pretty early in the novel series I can't talk too much about this. There are a number of side characters that have shown some sort of nature, but of all of them only two have gained my attention. The author has not yet announced his name, but he is described as the brown-haired man (ikr funny).He seems to be an early antagonist character, your usual slightly evil, egotistic, believes he is better than everyone bad guy, but theres a twist. Usually these types of characters don't show any skills, their usually all bark and no bite. But this one seems to have very good leadership skills, and has a good head between his shoulders. It feels like the character is more than just a stepping stone for the MC. The MC is also pretty good. He isn't your t
• coledrmdRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Although the idea is nothing new the story has it's own sense of individuality. The quality's not bad for this site. Overall it's a bit above average and could become a good story with a bit more work put into the characters. The guy claiming to be Ares dispite not acting like him, not being particularly charismatic, and clearly not having the skill to back it up and actauly being believed by multiple people just doesn't feel real. They're level ones challenging the lord and his trained guards. What kind of person expects that to work?