Deathgod Chronicles

Self-Published

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This is my first attempt at writing something other than poetry so it may be crude at the edges, please bear with it. I will try to improve with time. Tags may change as the story progresses but I will try not to get side tracked. I welcome any thoughts or comments you have about my work and will greatly appreciate it.************************************************Born with the power to save the world from the clutches of its impeding threats, Rafil was torn away from his parents a few months after birth from one of those impeding threats. What will now become of Rafil as he embarks on a journey to his destiny of bloodbath and slaughter.

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Status
Hiatus
Author
FlameLord

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURESUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTS

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Rating
3.5/ 5.0
Followers
13

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Community Reviews(1)

  • hao16Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Maybe it is early to make a review, but a review often helps a story get notices
    The Good Stuff
    Interesting settingExcellent descriptionsAcceptable style of writingThe Bad Stuff
    Lacking charactersCookie cutter motivations for the MCNo explanation for the World.Minimal worldbuildingWell, it's a story that can be so much more, but lacks a lot at the moment. I'll change my reviews in the future if there is improvement. I think there will be improvement, and frankly I don't blame the author for ignoring worldbuilding at the moment, for a lot of stories focus a lot on worldbuilding and forget the characters. Well, I hope the author can use this to further refine the plot