Death of a System Core
Self-Published
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Description
Something strange happened on the way to the Temple of The Sun.
This is an original, complete, litRPG flash fiction story. If there's enough interest I'll expand this universe.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- CabbagesAndKings
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 719
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This story has a lot of background and details and yet everything plays out in a such a way as to really muddy the core presentation of the idea. The very short 4 page story doesn't have enough time to establish itself and most of the description in the opening doesn't get to the point and the end becomes a rush where readers get everything thrown at them for a very rushed conclusion. It works, but this needs to be expanded and maybe shaped better because it has too many elements to really work.