Deals & Destiny
Self-Published
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Description
(A/N)I discovered that I can post fanfictions on this site so I decided to post the Familiar of Zero fanfic I made.
Walking home from a friends house after watching the FoZ anime, our hero suddenly finds himself in a familiar summoning situation... only something interferes and he gets a few new advantages.
Now, follow along as he breaks the show, builds a harem, and builds an empire all the while doing humorous, badass, and other Gary Stu stuff.
Contains elements from both the anime and manga. Also yes, the MC is a bit OP, but it's okay because it's funny.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Masin
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 60
- Views
- 13,743
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- AbramRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Spoiler: Spoiler
So I deleted my previous review, which was written when there were 3 chapters. This review was written when there were 4 chapters. The reason why I'm writing another review is because the writer has improve a bit since chapter 3. You can see the improvement in chapter 4 if you read it properly. And he may still improve.
Now, the reason why I gave the character rating 3 and a half is not because of the MC. The MC is 4 stars. The MC is quite good. I mean this is what i expect when i read a fanfiction harem anime story. Most harem anime fanfiction either have a good story with a stupid and frustrating MC who can't take advantage of a plot or a bad fast pace story with a badass MC. But this MC is actually takes advantages of the plots. And story is actually not bad, so far. the reason for the 3 and a half stars are the side characters. They need more fleshing out.
(Note÷ this review was written when there were only 4 Chapters) - DnojRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Pretty much a guns vs magic story, and predictably, guns win.
Overwhelming, even. And I'm all for that. Seeing medieval armies get mowed down by seemingly alien weapons, which are mundane to us, always gets gets me giddy like a kid.
The sex scenes were a little too long, imo. I've learned to skip through those, but hey, it's there.
It's also nice not to have a wimpy MC, and knows what he wants and gets it.
Overall, a typical harem power fantasy. Not amazing, but not bad either.
Definitely enjoyable, though.