DeadEnd's Isekai
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A story of a man that lived a sad life, never achieving anything however this is his new chance at life and he's not planing to waste it, using his gaming strats he hopes to get his life together and become something.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- ThatNoLifeArtist
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 11
- Views
- 3,619
Chapters(11 total)
- Chapter 11: Funky Trees.Jun 6, 2021
- Chapter 10: The young gravedigger.May 22, 2021
- Chapter 9: It’s not like that!May 16, 2021
- Chapter 8: Sour Serpant.May 8, 2021
- Chapter 7: The Wall Inspector.May 3, 2021
- Chapter 6: The trade secret!Apr 18, 2021
- Chapter 5: Mmmm Carrots.Apr 8, 2021
- Chapter 4: The Break Out.Apr 3, 2021
- Chapter 3: Like Rain in the Desert.Mar 31, 2021
- Chapter 2: A Culinary Crime.Mar 30, 2021
- Chapter 1: A great day to become enslaved.Mar 29, 2021
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Community Reviews(1)
- MrBadWithNamesRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0DeadEnd's Isekai is a comedic fantasy isekai as the name would suggest, it's key features include a weird setting, weird names and the tough kid, who is tough.
Style
Personally I'm not much of a fan of the large blocks of text with minimal formatting, but it's not painful to look at. Aside from that the descriptions and imagery are good and there are even a few neat images included.
I would also like to hear more commentary from the MC, as the conversations are often used to express thoughts, instead of, well, thoughts.
Story
I can't quite call what's going to happen next, which is good; personally I would like to see more development in the first few "zones" the story took place, but that's just nitpicking - over all the story thus far has been pretty entertaining.
Grammar
Yeaaaaah, 4/5 - that's the grammar... What else do you expect, it's passable... it's OK...
Character
Possibly my favourite part of the story are the characters, so far they lack any major development, but you can see the build-up to something, a bit of backstory is also spread out over the chapters.
As for who the best character is; obviously, tough characters are best for tough people.