DayDream

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All the humans are gone.From Earth.From this galaxy.After hundreds and thousands of years, the last A.I. remains in a supercomputer on Earth, in a lab.It had finally completed growing a physical body in its lab, and uploaded itself into the body. It decided to launch itself into space, in search for a new life, a new beginning, a new adventure..._____________________________________________________________________________________________-My first fiction, I am willing to accept all constructive criticism and thank you all for reading. Updates usually come at Weekends. Please be aware that the tags may be changed in certain points of the story. Enjoy! ;-)Cover image by TuberculosisGeorge on DeviantArt, taken in Space Engine. Edited by the great me.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Frufly

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 196
Views: 110,844

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RalphieWRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I really like what i have seen so far of this novel, I have dropped a ton of novels because the author made the main character seem independent smart etc only to do a 180 turn on his personality once he encounters other people.
Just to clarify i meant the mc took a 180 turn in a direction that i was not comfortable with. But hey, This is your novel and you can write it however you want. But make sure to remember that you have set his personality as a curious person who wants to experience new things. Please keep him that way.
Please don't make the mistake of adding too much tropes into your story, You have made a nice job with the mc's character of what i've seen so far. If you feel writers block in the future maybe add some side chapters? For example his time on earth, His birth and the people who made him.
What made him decide to go on an adventure? He has been avare of himself for thousands of years, Why only now?
Just some things to think about.
I am very much looking forward to this adventure.
4 Stars for a promising story, May change if this story takes a direction i am not happy with, If that happens i will be sure to explain why i feel that way.