Dawn of the Eclipse

Self-Published

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Description

Hero and Demon Lord.

Both are the different sides of the same coin.

One shall live while the other shall perish, however, one cannot exist without the other.

How ready are you to face your mortal enemy knowing that they are you?

Will you still live on knowing that you've been lied to in your whole entire life?

Will you still follow a false destiny?

Contradictions. Promises. Lies. Betrayal. Trust. Love

Take the sword and face the adversaries. Stand up with courage and forge your own destiny.

Conquer the contradictions. Follow your promise. Rise above their lies. Learn from every betrayal. Trust in yourself and those you love.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Cypher

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADCOMEDYDRAMASUPERNATURALSLICE OF LIFEROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFESTRONG LEADGENDER BENDERPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADSECRET IDENTITYMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
147
Views
14,293

Chapters(4 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • ElyasRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Love the whole 2 bodies 1 mind selfcest thingy you got going on. Looking forward to future chapters, this is prob my favourite novel on royalroad that doesnt already have a million views. Will try to update the review when there is more content
  • TrevelyanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    For the potential readers
    If your wondering if you should read this: JUST DO IT it has unique twist on reincarnation that I haven't seen before which immediately prompted me to write this, my first review.
    For the Author(s)
    It might be a good idea to add the twin body situation into the description since when I read that chapter it immediately hooked me.
    As of Ch 2.5 - Could use some fleshing out in these areas/ some of my thoughts:
    -Parents characterization
    -Perhaps more reasoning on their learning capabilities (maybe as a result of the joined concious /subconcious of the two bodies results in higher memoriaztion/recall)
    -Maybe in that world a what makes up a person thoughts/memories is shared between the brain and       the soul (Makes the twin body situation more reasonable since we define a person via their conciousness in their brains)
    -Do the twin bodies effect the emotional state of the character (ie. hormones of the different genders etc.)
    -Barony political situation/location/what town or castle and villages make up it, maybe something on the kingdom it resides within
    -How they introduce the agriculture/smithing improvements, more on the affects it has on the barony and its status as a backwater (love stories where the character builds up the state of the world around them)
    -More character perspective on the twin's behaviour (eg. finishing each others sentences: do they find it creepy or endearing etc.)
    -You might be moving the story a little quickly having them turn 12 so early on in chapters unless you plan on having their childhood a very minor part of the story.
    Just some of my suggestions, never wrote a story before so take them as you will. Since you've said this is the prototype fiction I look forward to seeing you utilise the flexibility that entails. I don't want to seem harsh pointing out all these improvements that could be made I just want this fiction to succeed since I love the idea :D
    Keep up the good work!