Dark Weaver: First Apprentice
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The first apprentice of the Hidden King is pushed into the world to make a name for herself. She, member of the weakest of the elven races, must prove to all that she is not worthless.Pride is a powerful emotion for those who have never felt it.
-----------------------------------------------------This story is a sequel to Grand Weaver: Renewal(/fiction/5917)-----------------------------------------------------Arc 1: Cloaked City - [01,18]Arc 2: This Is Not War - [19,40]
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- Axelord
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- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 354
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Community Reviews(4)
- GibbsonRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5A bit short but a good stand alone sequel; Ending was rather lackluster and open ended, kinda feels like the ending of a tutorial.
- Silhou8Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5Excellent characters and a fully fleshed world create an excellent start to this story. Props to the author and I hope to see more.
- ShakaRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Kudos to the author for managing to create quite an interesting story, and to keep it that way, despite its extremely OP two main characters. It was a good idea to change the protagonist compared to "Grand Weaver: Pagan King".
The writing style is nice, a bit peculiar from time to time, but quite enjoyable nevertheless.
The story is solid and, as I already said, quite interesting (otherwise I would not be here reading your fiction). The only downside is that it requires one to read your previous fiction to completely understand the setting and the characters, but that is not really a problem.
Nothing to say about the grammar, apart from the occasional mistake or typo.
Good characters, Wendelyn passing from side-character to protagonist has been, as I pointed out before, a very good decision.
Lastly, I love all the references thrown into the story, especially those related to ancient Rome.
All in all, a 4 star story in my opinion. It may have some flaws, but it is still at the beginning, and the author likes to experiment, so it might evolve into something even better... or maybe not.
Keep up the good work! - Maou Shojou Areil chanRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5i havent read the preivious fiction and jumped straight into this one (mosly cuz theres a female mc and those are like the only fictions i read) after like 4 chapters i sat there confused af until i realized that there is a previous story that relates to this one personally i would suggest going to read that one first b4 this one however i am also not the shiniest marble ever so if u are and u had no porblems understanding things then ignore this and read dis shit guz its interesting even if confuzing to me
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