Dark Moon : Rise of The Dark King

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Angelus Raizel Reinheart, the second prince of Asteria, better known as Asteria's Demon Prince. After his father died in a mysterious accident, a strange power entered his body, changed his fate. As the result... everyone doubted his identity as a royal family. His uncle, King Gervis began to treats him as a war puppet even forcing him relinquish his right to the king's throne. While his cousin, Ilex Ferris treats him like a sworn enemy.

Under pressure, he only hoped to fulfill his last promise to his father, protecting his kingdom until his death. But it changed when he was accused of rebelling, at the same time he was abandoned by the woman he loved. Dying on the foreign land, a mysterious power revive him. But he's not the same Angelus Raizel they once knew...

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Warning:

>This isan Action-Romance Fantasy Story. I won't follow the rules of the throne inheritance, also the rules of the king / prince / princess has to be protected, instead I will make them wield weapons and bring them to the front lines. So I will make the kings clash their weapons against each other rather than their generals (of course I will make their general fight with them).

>I have added the high fantasy tag so that you understand the world in this story has its own rules that are different from the real world.

>This story includes sword fight, magic fight, barehand fight, war between kingdoms, strategy, city / castle infiltration, conspiracy, betrayal and a few chapters of romantic scenes at the beginning of the story (that looks like a boring 'fairy tale love story', but you will understand their love story actually a slow romance and full of conspiracy at the middle of story).

>I'm not a pro writer, so there will be a lot of errors.

>Cover by commission

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2020
Author
Nanakawaichan

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYMAGICANTI-HERO LEADSTRONG LEADMALE LEADWAR AND MILITARYHIGH FANTASYSTRATEGY

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Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
88
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127,196

Chapters(128 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • xurbloodRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The premise of the story is good and original. Even if loops are left along with some chaotic ramblings.  It's hard to get any real feelings for the MC, with how fast the story moves and the author seemingly not sure which way he should make you feel for the MC.
    There are some grammar mistakes in spelling. This seems more of a rough draft then a finished work. Where author is trying to get his ideas out to fast at times. Chapter length is to short to really get into, by the time you start it's over.
    I believe once author gets the holes fixed along with grammar it could be a great story.  Slow down seems like your trying to push this story out before you're ready. Finish your idea before a rewrite, because so many start a rewrite and drop it.
  • ZentariRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    The MC's father, the king, dies and he has his hair color forcibly changed. His uncle then, somehow, becomes a king instead of regent. Advisors? Political allies? What's that? Why would anyone raise a fuss over what is a succession crisis?
    It doesn't get better, since the main 'love' interest is introduced as a young, strong woman, that completely falls on her face and has to be rescued by the MC.
    The author also has a habit of stopping in the middle of a scene to dump exposition: "Here's the kingdom of X", followed by an actual image in the middle of the chapter. "This is the Y sword", followed by a boast like "It can only be broken by...!"
    It's readable, and it might be interesting later on though, so it might be your cup of tea.