Dark Mage: The Offer

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Description

Over a millennia ago a dark mage sealed the first contract with the Demon Emperor. He opened a rift and Demons spilled into the world before collapsing. The demon race has tirelessly warred with the human race since that time and slowly expanded its territory into the human lands it has conquered.A youth lives quietly in an unassuming village. Having lost his mother, he has lived under the kindness of those that used to be strangers. He has learned diligently, trying to repay their love and care. However, a darkness approaches and our 'shy hero' will have to learn to confront it while walking in its shadows. He is a dark mage and he will have to learn of the responsibilities that status entails as well as its struggling reputations amongst the human populace.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: GreyWorldBluePlanet

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 51
Views: 36,176

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

GrayshadeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Really nice, I like the story and the pace. I think I saw maybe one grammar mistake, so that is basically flawless. I'll say again, I really like how the story unfolds, it's not forced, and you don't suddenly drown the reader in too much information.
This seems and reads like one of those stories that start slowly and consistently get good ratings and NOT like those stories that shoot up to top 5 in 10 chapters and after a week or two lose views and ratings and drown in mediocrity.
Keep on going like this, ratings and views will come sooner than you think!
IgfryRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The writing is pretty good, but the plot has barely progressed. I get that it shouldn't be too fast, but it also should not be too slow. You should probably include more time skips to skip the monotonous parts.