Dark Chronicles
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A 15 year old boy named Kaito has a dark and painful pasthe gets summoned to a different world but not as a heroor a demon lord but as something differentAuthors note:first fiction so please give as much support as possible and i am bad at grammar the only thing i am good at is coming up with a good story so please forgive me and enjoy my fiction
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- HazeyKnight
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 236
- Views
- 211,529
Chapters(62 total)
- Ch 19 Maxed OutMay 25, 2016
- Title changeMay 24, 2016
- Ch 18 LightningMay 24, 2016
- Ch 17 HomeroomMay 23, 2016
- Ch 16 RegistrationMay 22, 2016
- Ch 15 LetterMay 21, 2016
- NOT A CHAPTERMay 20, 2016
- Ch 14 NightMay 20, 2016
- Ch 13 FatherMay 19, 2016
- Ch 12 AliceMay 18, 2016
- Ch 11 The mansionMay 17, 2016
- CH 10 The JobMay 16, 2016
- CH 9 BlackoutMay 15, 2016
- Ch 8 Bandit's BurnMay 14, 2016
- Ch 7 BreakfestMay 14, 2016
- Ch 6 TestMay 13, 2016
- Ch 5 HuntingMay 12, 2016
- Ch 4 JourneyMay 11, 2016
- Ch 3 More TrainingMay 11, 2016
- Ch 2 Start TrainingMay 10, 2016
Reviews
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Community Reviews(5)
- GiantsRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The story itself is good, not too different from summoned stories. The only problem i have with it is the grammar is below average, its not awful, just it could be a lot better. I recommend reading it if that doesn’t bother you and I find it interesting
- baconlordRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5May not be the most grammatically correct, but the story has improved over the chapters. I am doing this review at the time of chapter 27 and so far the story is going well. There are a few cliches but nothing that will break the story. If you can move past the grammar in the early chapters then its worth reading.
- Briansoh71Royal Road★★★ 2.5For one the plot is ok but the way the characters work has no logical thinking for example in chp 1 a old man wanted to kill the mc but after a few words the atmosphere of it change completely. It makes no sense if someone want to kill you but in the next moment he is apologise to the mc. it may be due to the bad use of grammar
- Sir_SwagalotRoyal Road★★ 2.01. The dialogue does not flow well.
2. The lack punctuation is rivaled only by Japanese shoved through google translate.
3. plot is pretty much nonexistent
4. kind of bring honestly, I kept falling asleep while reading .
I would recommend rewriting the first chapters as you will just continue putting people off - KandoralRoyal Road★ 0.5The way the chapter(s) are now it is not readable. There is no punctuation in it. It only hurts the eyes trying to read it.
He got information about what he has to do 5 days ago, since then he released 5 new chapters, but has done nothing to fix his chapters.
The way this story is now I can not recommend others to read it and can only tell them to refrain from trying