Dao of the Web [Old]

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“Choose wisely, for choice is what makes the Cultivator.”

This was the one true maxim of this world, where the law of the jungle was the creed. Where the mighty flayed the meek to sate their desires. Where the heavens weaved stories on behalf of their favoured children, using all else as mere pawns for their whims. For aeons unchanged did this world of cultivation remain, with traditions and taboos set in stone.

Enter Yung—previously Jung—a soul adrift from a far gentler world.

Once but a mere mortal, he had innocently asked his fellow cultivators this one sinless question: “Is such cruelty truly necessary?”

“No!” He had judged; his modern sensibilities would not allow it! In a world where he could cultivate to be anything, he chose to be kind. Thus, standing upon the shoulders of all the great thinkers of Earth, with his rich foxy sweetheart as his compass, he had set out with a dream to make the heavens merciful.

But alas, lady fate was fickle after all.

In a twist of celestial irony, Yung’s compassionate bid to better the world turned the very heavens into a divine comedy even the tribulations found too absurd to strike down.

On Yung’s cosmic stage, the Ancestral Sages misplaced their wisdom, while the Sect Sovereigns played the fools. The Empress Fairies waged wars on wonders; as the Bewitching Vixens taunted, dancing in liquid laughter pools. Mortals scorned with contempt a many, for the Enlightened Arhats turned Zen into Zany. Even the Immortal Devils stopped caring, gambling cards with strange Outer Deities.

Like clowns in a circus, the majesties of the multiverse rose below their egos, all wanting to bend Yung’s noble designs for their own uncanny gains.

Join Yung on this bizarre odyssey, as he strives to realize his dreams amidst fate’s unpredictable twists and turns.

Disclaimer:This fiction may contain explicit descriptions of erotic acts, long character arcs, philosophical discourses, irrationality over logic, partisan idealisms, subjective ethicality, and other adult themes, all towards being an emotion-packed (fun) story.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: CatVI

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 1,082
Views: 23,498

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

wahbasahRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i cant do much review
but i love this story
even not much happened until now, ch 33
mc is i-know-im-side-character-so-dont-disturb-the-real-mc-plot
using his modern thinking and moral to tackle the situation
nothing much happened in this early chapter
nothing much happened in this early chapter
nothing much happened in this early chapter
damn you 50 words long requirement for review
Synthetic ReplicantRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
First things first the synopsis has zero bearing on the story I have read so far. Whatever story it is describing sounds like fun, but it isn't this one. This is the story of someone who ignorant of the world he finds himself in, but also wily and willing to take interesting risks. It's a Trickster tale.
The story itself is fun. The world building is just getting it's feet underneath it, but it isn't a rehash of Battle Through the Heavens. It has already introduced enough threads that I don't know exactly where it is going, but I am excited to find out.
The characters are also early days, but the main character is shaping up to be a mix of a stranger in a strange land and Bugs Bunny. He might not know exactly what's going on, but he'll work the angles, and even enjoy some luck along the way. The support characters are shaping up nicely as well. It's not just a grab bag of tropes. The tropes are their, but with enough of a spin that you don't know exactly what they might become.
Grammar mistakes are few, and quickly fixed.
Style is still developing, but no egregious flaws, just someone still putting together their voice and figuring out how they want their pacing to work.
Overall I am having a good time, and can recommend giving it a solid try yourself.
TimeFrozenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is delightful, each person adds something new to the story and each scene enjoyable to read. Dao of the Web showcases well thought out story telling, characterization, and immersive writing that draws you in word by word. My one complaint is that there isn't more of it to read yet, absolutely deserving of 5 stars.
ZagarothRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I appreciate that you have to wait a few chapters for some threads to tie together, and even then it doesn't spoon-feed you the plot. And I wouldn't be surprised if a few things reappear later in some form.
The author has a well-built structure for why accidental circumstances qualify our protag for transmigration and a small boon, and just a bit of luck to get things rolling (and really, most heroes start with a bit of luck somewhere). And he's doing an excellent job of using the tools at his command to pull things together to change his life, and the lives of others, for the better.
I like the characters, they have real personalities, and even a particular emotional stereotype that is used here that I oft find problematic is in play mostly because of past trauma combined with stubbornness. It's a reasonable situation for someone to have that particular trait (in spoiler)
Tsundere, to be clear
Also, mad props to a certain maid for how she deals with her mistress. XD
damienrjamesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It is clear that CatVI dedicated significant time and effort to develop an enthralling piece of work with not only delightful characters but also vivid settings and captivating dialogues. He allows readers to immerse themselves in the story through engaging descriptions, meaningful actions, and dimensional characters.
A second chance at life from death's row, always a refreshing story to read. I enjoyed the route of reincarnation. By placing the protagonist into an existing person with their own memories, the story gains a sense of grounding, eliminating the need for a disoriented and lost protagonist. I also enjoyed how the duo personalities was handled, showing the effects on a mental level. With believable character and strong internal conflict, you get a story with layers, and stories like that tend to leave a impression on readers.
While I expect the world development is likely to expand in later chapters, what is already on virtual paper already showcases elements of a classic Wuxia setting. The author pays attention to intricate details, ensuring that the little things are not overlooked. The personalities and cultures of the initial two clans are presented with finesse, providing a solid foundation for further exploration. Keep writing and building!
theanimemailRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Man, while this feels weird to say after the ending of the chapter, I have to say that every single chapter has left me smiling, which is undoubtedly an amazing feeling; keep up the great work :). I absolutely love the setting, characters and subsequent interactions (note: each character feels like an actual person with personality flaws and distinct views on life and love), fantastic grammar and verbose word choices, great scene/world descriptions, and the pretty unique way the story has progressed.
Side note: pretty much every chapter has left me smiling, which is an amazing feeling; keep up the great work :). Also, I'm tired so I'll leave this review here.
AgoramonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
In a world of endless MCs we're not brought immediately from one face slapping contest to another in quick succession of the so called Sons & Daughters of heaven barely fleshing them out in favour of the actual Protagonist getting cool points. Instead their beliefs and cliches are fully explored by talking about it. Plus getting a glimpse of their inner monologues to compare who's more coocoo in the head.
MC is a good one, has definitely R18 thoughts about our main girl but doesn't act on it, cause he recognises it as just superficial desire. Though he wouldn't mind at all I believe for a one time thing-- plus very vivid descriptions of the heroine if that's your thing, curtsy of our MC's keen eye pointed nearly also below face. Another philosophical practice for the ages he teaches to all with vigour among all the reforms he brings to this lawless world.
Only complaint I could see is about the grammar sometimes, new editor is handling it swimmingly well, plus easy to ignore since I enjoy the characters and their antics.
HakanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I feel that most rating systems that lets the user rate the content fails. My honest rating for this novel would probably be around 4 star since 3 stars should represent something worth reading. Giving it four stars would be to compare it with a novel that average a four star here on RR and that doesn't make it justice. I could have made a review of the actual novel but I choose to rant about ratings instead. Give it a try, I like it!
Julius RictorRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I could say a lot of things about the story, but most people already cover the important parts. I'd like to mention something else I think needs to be touched upon: the author is passionate about the genre and the work they're creating. When those two things are working in tandem, the project ends up being good. It's hard to give less than 5 stars to anyone who truly cares this much about their story, the world they've created, or their characters. And if CatVI is to be believed, they had 150K words written before even writing. To sit on a story that long with no feedback with only your passion and love of the series is hard. I did it, so I know what that feels like.
The author recommends other people's books in each chapter, creates memes in post-chapters, and is constantly interacting with those that like his book. CatVI is always looking for input with polls and questions. The series feels very lively, almost like a community space.
The story fits well into the genre, so if you like Cultivation book series, you'll probably like this one as well. The artwork is captivating and the MC is enjoyable. It's in a third-person perspective, so the action feels more all-encompassing rather than focused on the MC in particular. The grammar is good. I didn't find any big mistakes, but I'm also not a person who notices that kind of thing. My brain ignores that to focus on the story instead.
Give it a read!
KlisikRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'll preface this by saying the story has a very slice of life vibe going on which is not a bad thing as they have included the tag. Nonetheless, I would not recommend reading if slice of life isn't your thing. I normally don't read slice of life but this story hooked me with the premise, and even if it hasn't gotten there as of chapter 24 (i read ahead) there are enough hints at it happening in the future that I'm satisfied. Further, I have read the author's other work so I can attest that they can keep the quality going.
Overall the story is good and I have no complaints other than the confusing terms used to describe cultivation. While it is necessary for a story to distinguish itself in terms of worldbuilding there is still the reader to consider. Too much of anything good can be bad and that is what the terms feels like to me. That is why I deducted half a star from the style score.
No problems grammar wise as far as I can tell.
Characters aren't a problem either.
Story is still in the beginning stages but I find no fault with what's there.