Dagon, Dungeon evolved

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

VoidPath

• 22 - Dungeon Rush (the other side) Glory to the Animal Planet Channel
  Oct 31, 2016
• 21 - Dungeon Rush (1)
  Oct 27, 2016
• 20 - Maze Walkers
  Jul 15, 2016
• 19 - Touch me not
  Jul 13, 2016
• 18 - The First Mini boss Fight (or lack thereof)
  Jul 11, 2016
• teaser chapter idea
  Jul 11, 2016
• 17 - Fruit Tree Fresh
  Jul 9, 2016
• 16 - Altar of offering
  Jul 8, 2016
• 15 - The missing day
  Jul 7, 2016
• 14 - Earning the dough
  Jul 6, 2016
• 13 - Clickbait
  Jul 4, 2016
• Ugly map update
  Jul 4, 2016
• 12 - A tale of Hemlock
  Jul 3, 2016
• 11 - Lead the Charge
  Jul 2, 2016
• 10 - Music to my ears
  Jun 30, 2016
• 9 - Tier 2 map Expansion
  Jun 26, 2016
• 8 - Scavenger Hunt
  Jun 25, 2016
• 7 - Safety First
  Jun 21, 2016
• 6 - Rolling in the Deep
  Jun 20, 2016
• 5 - I set fire to the rain (plant)
  Jun 14, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(7)

• SapawaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I found this very unique and thought out. Consistent without the very common story loops or plot holes that are common these days. Absolutely on my favorites list now.
• JayQueRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Lately i have found that many of the stories i enjoy reading about would be games i want to play.
  This is definitely on the list.
  Good read, fun light and quirky. Keep the flow going :
• SimeonrrRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  as of chapter 17:
  Style: the style is very interesting, there is almost no information give about the mc but that does not hinder the story at all. instead i think giving this little information keeps you suspended and eager to learn more about the story.
  Story: it is a "general" dungeon story it is in a VR setting so there are statuses etc and all that other jazz. the story follows  a mc who plays as a dungeon. he gets some funny quirks trown in and TADA a story is there.
  Grammar: not the best, not the worst. the author sometimes uses the wrong tense of a word which can be annoying and he sometimes forgets to add some letters to the end of a word.
  Character: the mc is kind off OP but doesnt use it yet. as far as i can tell he isnt a "bad" guy and he just normally plays the game he is playing ( is the name of the game ever mentioned i dunno :p )
• neufeldr1Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I like the idea for the story, but there is no info on what is going on in the story, simply the fact that he's playing a game and we don't know anything about the world or what exactly he's doing. Also, Grammar Please!! XD it's just so-so, a bit of practice or proof reading/editor would be a massive plus for the story. Thanks for writing!
• newyevon2Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I am giving 4 stars for now until there are more chapters are wrote, review and ratings will be reevaluated as the story goes on.
  ~~~~~After chapter 3: I'm liking the story so far.  I've always liked what people could do with plants, "The strongest job gardener" & "Watching grass grow", and i'm excited to see where the story is going to go from here. I really hope you continue writing this story and add multiple plants and the like to it. The only things i ask for is no blatant "op-ness", which i hope the rigged thing doesn't turn into, & the occasional pov. P.S.--I would love more chapters, in fact the more chapters the better, i speed read which can really, really suck when im reading something i enjoy and there's not enough of it, and im enjoying this story so far. So... you know.... *cough, triple daily updates, cough* ahem.... my bad, sore throat and all that.
• SteelheartRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  As of chapter 12(?):
  - There is no background info at all, I don't know how old the mc is, where he lives, whether he has friends etc. basically everything from RL is missing (I heard that's intentional so it isn't really a mistake, it's just weird)
  - Grammar: I've read worse but it's not perfect
  - I can't really see the dungeon layout. Try not to make lists of what's in a room, as it's only confusing. I can't remember any of it. I actually think the whole story is a bit confusing, as there's no background info at all. I don't even really know the setting of the game other than it's a medieval one. But the thing that's the most annoying are still the lists of things in a room.
• KiokuRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  The writing is pretty good, and I like that it's a plant dungeon... but re-stating what's in each room over and over is annoying (thankfully behind spoilers in later chapters so you don't have to scroll through it all), and everything just gets pretty boring after not too far in.  The biggest issue hurting it is probably that it's a game rather than an actual world, so it has both janky game mechanics dragging it down (NPC escalation), and the lack of weight or consequence making nothing matter.