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Dungeon. Warthis story is about a young 10 year old boy who wanders into a dungeon after his childish father and reckless mother who travels with him who both though it was just a very deep cave.the result of this is the ultimatum with both the mother and father dying to a pitfall trap and the boy being left alone in the dungeon lost, till though wandering about the dungeon he reaches the worst place possible.the boss room!(inspired from other fiction -the slime dungeon- but inst connected in anyway)(mature language)

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ImpalerRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

I like the idea and the pace of the story but the writing is a bit rough around the edges.

LegionOfDavidRoyal Road

★★ 1.5

There's little to ZERO punctuation in each chapter, not to mention every paragraph is one GIANT run on sentence without capitalisation. Just look at "prologue two" and tell me I'm wrong.
I'm sure there's a great story going on, with some wonderful characters, but it's rather difficult to understand when there's a lack of punctuation.

D.W

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