Curse of Change (Hiatus)

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(Hiatus to work of my other fiction)What if the world was keeping secrets? Secrets so dark and powerful that one must simply be unaware of them lest they be destroyed. Experiments that are too horrible to reveal, hidden monsters too terrible to release. Darkness the overwhelms the light, power that trumps all, beings of ferocity unseen by the masses. What would you do if you stumbled across one of these secrets? What COULD you do?------------------------------------------------------------[Hey everyone, this is MultiBlitz15. Apart from writing stories for english class in school, this is my first time ever writing a fiction, so please bear with me. I intend this to be a story involving the ""what if's"" of life and the darker sides of humanity. The story will start on Earth but will escalate into something much, much more. That is where the fantasy tag will come into play. On the topic of tags, some of them may not be permanent and some simply haven't been added yet. Also, I DO NOT intend to include sex scenes or major tragedy in my fiction. While there might be sexual references and minor tragedies, there shouldn't be anything beyond that. Finally, this fiction is rated Mature 18+ due to the incredible amounts of blood, gore, brutality, and other stuff I intend to include. Thank you, and please enjoy the story!](P.S If you find grammar mistakes, please let me know in the comments, I would greatly appreciate it.)(P.P.S I finished adding more content to the previous chapters!!)

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2016

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
31
Views
37,337

Chapters(26 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • Epiclyepic44Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Great story, style is really good, but you need to work more on details. Grammar is nearly flawless and the characters need so work, especially their backgrounds and their personalities.
    My main complain is the characters. You need to work on character devopement: a lot! They characters themselves have a lot of potential, but they need work. Otherwise, you are doing a good job and your story has great potential. Keep it up!
  • BlinkOfAnEyeRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Story is interesting I can give it that. But the style it's written makes it an annoyance.
    The story is basically progressed through dialogue. I have no clue on what the characters look like, what places they are in, all we know so far is the main character is basically a psychopath with a personality equivalent to a 3 year old. Oh right he as 3 personalities(Or 273?). We don't know much about the main character abilities other than the dialogue.
    This story just sounds like something someone would write as they go along without any prior planning.  Suffers majorly for lack of any world building, character development and the chapters are insanely short to the point where I feel like I am reading a TL;DR. Seriously. I have seen grocery lists that are longer.