Crystalline Heart
Self-Published
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Description
Nox is lower than a slave. He's beaten and worked like a dog, and despite his utter lack of aptitude, chooses to study magic.He lacks the mana to cast anything, but he loves magic more than his own life.This is his story.------------------This is my first attempt at serious creative writing, so I'm throwing it out there to see if it floats.Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Rubixxcube
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 16
- Views
- 2,130
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The author blurb here seems very disconnected from the story in which is presented. To go from zero to an absolute monster so quickly undercuts the whole premise of the MC being this lowest of the low. I have some concerns exactly about how the presentation works, and while the prose is a bit rough it is not bad - it just feels like a different story than what was presented.