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In a blink, he's on another world.Von, who doesn't remember his real name, is suddenly put to choose if he shall join the war of a kingdom that has nothing to do with him.As he accepts, a new path opens before him; it's time to explore his own limits and surpass them, learning what it means to be human.Updates every other wednesday (On hiatus for now!).

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M.C.R.Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

The plot is wonderful and hooking so far I wasn't the slightest confused and understood everything on the first chapter (which doesn't happen that often on the first chapter) I still want to read more, the characters are all descripted in an amazing and detailed way and had become etched inside a place of the me (the reader) that only an amazing book could reach, the surroundings are also described and explained in a way that really helps me and I'm quite sure many others get a bigger picture in my mind, which always makes a book better and easier to picture in a mind's eye, which makes it all the more interesting. I was a bit confused with the names and who was talking(I figured it out with little but still some difficulty) so I would suggest making quotation marks when someone is talking to make it clearer and easier for other readers to decipher who's saying or thinking what but all in all I understood pretty much everything. I'm going to like this book and I hope it will be worth it(I highly doubt it won't be)and I suggest anyone else who sees this comment to read, like and comment this book. Wonderfully written can't wait for more!!!

e.m.s.Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

i totally LOVED it!
incredible and mysterious,it had a charming air of mystery that is rarely found.
their are many things im wondering which will make me come back for more as soon as its out.
the characters are shady,and you gave me many tips for my stories.
it was really well written and your talent is quiete obvious,especially in mystery and drama.
imreally wondering how they LOOK though,it helps me form an image in my head,making me all he mora attached.
i loved the story,although i Am wondering how she got to the world...which i didnt really understand.
the grammer was really good,and i liked how the talking was shaded.
really amazing in all,keep it up!
ps;if you could check out my story daisies,and the poems that are coming out soon,it would be greatly apreciated~e.m.s.

librarysmilesRoyal Road

★★ 2.0

The main character has a problem. It's not being summoned to a new world, though that happens. It's not learning a new language. It's not learning magic. It's not almost being kidnapped. It's not even the war. The problem is...
...social interaction.
The main character's problem is everywhere. No amount of coddling will make up for that fact and the main character is obsessed over his problem. Whatever happens in the war is secondary to his own problem.
Doesn't a squirrel-like main character sound better? I summon magic squirrel-thing! Squirrel throws a magic nut! The enemies were conquered! Good job super squirrel! *pat* *pat* Now onto the adventure of visiting all the creatures of the land to find a way to summon the whole squirrel family. What was that?!? Squirrel teleportation?!? You're the best, super squirrel.
On a more serious note, the story is well-written, does an admirable job of "show, don't tell", and the fantasy world sounds like a fantastic tourist trap. If not for those three points, this novel has a solid spot in my waste basket.

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