Crisis Zero

Self-Published

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Description

Crisis Zero, an event that forever changed the world. In this story, follow the adventures of a boy and his sister who lost their mother during this incident... Unlike a typical adventure themed story, this story tends to dwell into a more comedic and romantic side that I hope everyone can enjoy :)

Story revisits the lives of heroic spirits of the past whether it be fictional or real, inspired by the fate series :)

Cover isn't my image, credits to the owner https://www.pinterest.com/pin/505529126903206511/

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
stancool2

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
45
Views
25,081

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • EmbryonicRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The character development and description is nice and the story is something I can get behind. However, you may want to work on the paragraphing of your dialogue. All the speech bunched with the actions of the characters and the inner thoughts of the MC make the words feel cramped somewhat.
    On the bright side, great use of the first-person perspective and I like the depth of your characters, although their introductions were a bit abrupt.
    All that aside, I'd read more! It's refreshing to find a story that's making progress these days and I'll be sure to follow. Good luck!
  • gamegreen47Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    First Web Novel I read so far that isn't too cringy haha keep up the good work! All the best!
    I like your style of focusing more on dialogues and thoughts of the main character, gets the reader more engaged, personally it allows me to recreate the exact scenarios perfectly in my mind :)
    Story just started so not much to say but you are heading in the right direction
    Grammar-wise you could work on it a bit more but it is fine
    Characters are your typical harem characters, this is good enough for me personally, would love to see further character expansions!
    All in all, you are heading in the right direction and only time can tell if you would become successful! Wish you all the best!