Creation System

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Leo was murdered by a truck and his soul travelled into the underworld. Underworld is a dog-eat-dog world where strong rule over the weak. Having started the cultivation journey with the help of creation system and equipped with the divine soul Leo's future knew no bound.

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2.3/ 5.0
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  • BullerRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    When making these kinds of reviews, I like to sugar coats my complaints. Before, I've crtizied a lack of proper grammar by saying that the story itself seemed pretty decent. Here? I just... can't. I honestly can't say that I think the story will work out. There's an extra space between every , and . and it doesn't stop being annoying. You just can't ignore it.
    And the talking. Damn, I just can't agree with how the author decided to make them talk. It might be popular in some genres but I just couldn't make it work in my head. It needs work before I can give it a reasonable rating.
    3/5. Can change with proper care.