Crafting Hero

Self-Published

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Description

The story of a Hero that was summoned to another world, later discarded due to his class. Crafting his way through the world; Full of exotic weapons, potions, and beasts-armors - His crazy adventure has just begun

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Lemon

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFEMALE LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAI

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
169
Views
23,813

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • SundjinRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    As of chapter 8.
    By my reckoning, it has plenty of potential and excellent grammar. The only problem I really see so far is a matter of pacing and convenience. The rest of the review includes spoilers as of chapter 8.
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    The problems I have so far include the MC as of chapter 8 having already found a legendary master to teach him, eaten a fruit that gives him perfect mana control and seemingly without effort used it to reforge his body after he broke his spine. One of these things is lucky, all three is a bit too much for my tastes. At least in only 8 chapters, perhaps all three of these things in a much longer time and after a much greater struggle and I would not find it as unappealing. I can see finding a master, it is the capital after all. I can see finding a fruit that gives you better mana in a forest of mutation. But a legendary master and a mythical fruit that gives MAXIMUM affinity with mana is problematic to me.
    The MC is essentially handed these things with little to no struggle in only a few days then I shudder to think how close he would be to a godlike existence in 50 chapters.
    That and the swiftness of the MCs stay in the castle, being summoned to a world of fantasy and then being thrown aside by those who summoned you would likely spark more thoughts than “Those bastards, summoning me to this world and then just discarding me like shit” I angrily muttered in a low voice, “Fuck them”.
    As it stands I see a story concept with potential, but as of right now is lacking in pacing, it feels rushed. If the author slowed down some I can imagine this being pretty great.
    The reason I have given it a fairly high score is because of the potential i see, what I see in the worldbuilding and the fact that he/she actually appears to have some form of character growth planned.