Corrupted soul
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Original story with original way of writing hope you like itDavid woke up bound by gold chain inside a white space and now he is trying to remember how it go to this point and why is he chained........
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Corrupted_soul
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 3,354
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- jsghinesRoyal Road★★ 2.0I'm going to take a shot at this and say that English is not the authors main language. There are ton's of misspelling's, atrocious formatting, and many, many little errors that make this a pain to read. The only saving grace is that a bit of intrigue is acheived, but besides that, it's painful and dull. The chapter's are also short, which leads into the real problem with this story, it tells you what's going on, rather than showing. It reads much more like someone's overly specific outline, rather than a story.
All in all, until the author finds someone who speaks english as their first language, and puts in the effort to actually go over and make sure their story is properly written, it's not worth your time.