Cooking with Tom

Tom, as is his species in general, is new to the galactic stage and the weirdness that comes with all these new species. Despite his reservations towards a species that uses fire for practically everything, he can’t help but ask this strange human more and more questions. That this would lead to a lasting friendship and an invitation to this pyromaniac beings house, he could not have predicted.

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I would love to have some feedback from you to polish my writing. Please be gentle, as this is only my fifth short-story.

The picture is from Preppy Kitchen. They also own the recipe I build the story around. I just really liked the cookies and the idea of an alien being baffled by them.