Convenant of Shadows

Self-Published

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Clythia is the most powerful witch on the planet Zyvern. But as the peace and prosperity of the planet are fracturing, she and the other rulers have to confront the Sovereign in charge of it. However, to lower the blow of the catastrophe, she strikes a deal with an ancient entity. The consequences of that bargain will be an expensive price that tests her loyalty to her loved ones, her kingdom, and, more importantly, to herself.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: PearlsWitch

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Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
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PawnsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Characters: The novel presents a diverse array of characters, each with their distinct personalities and motivations. Queen Clythia stands out as a strong, assertive leader, unafraid to confront the other rulers despite their conflicting agendas. King Morven exudes an aura of coldness and cunning, while Queen Hypaxia exudes beauty and poise, masking her own secrets. The other rulers, including Prime Glythia, King Kay, Queen Zahar, and King Modyr, contribute to the tension and dynamics of the meeting with their varying perspectives and concerns. interesting characters yet not new to the table.
Style: The narrative style effectively immerses the reader in the world, painting vivid descriptions of the setting and characters. The dialogue is sharp and engaging, conveying the underlying tensions and power dynamics between the rulers. The use of descriptive language enhances the atmosphere, from the salty aroma of the sea to the ominous shadows cast by the monoliths.
Story: The story advances the overarching plot of the novel by introducing a critical decision that the rulers must make regarding the looming blight threatening their lands. It effectively sets the stage for future conflicts and developments, highlighting the complexities of politics and power struggles. The revelation of the deteriorating conditions on each continent adds depth to the world-building and raises the stakes for the characters.
Writing: The writing is skillfully executed, with a strong command of language and pacing. The chapter maintains a sense of urgency and tension throughout, keeping the reader engaged from start to finish. The interactions between the characters feel authentic and nuanced, revealing their alliances, rivalries, and hidden agendas. Overall, the chapter demonstrates a mastery of storytelling and characterization, leaving readers eager to see how the narrative unfolds in subsequent chapters.
Sreader123Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This captivating story plunges readers into a meticulously crafted fantasy universe, rich with diversity and intrigue. At its heart is Queen Clythia, a character of remarkable complexity, embodying the essence of an anti-hero. Despite the story being in its nascent stage with just eight chapters, the depth and breadth of the narrative suggest an epic saga is unfolding. The author excels in weaving a tapestry of characters that are so vividly drawn, each could command their own novel.
The narrative is distinguished by its detailed, vibrant descriptions, bringing the fantastical world to life in a way that is both immersive and sensory. This attention to detail ensures that the story stands clear of the common 'white room syndrome' that plagues many novels, offering instead a world teeming with color and life. The interactions between Clythia and the ensemble cast are portrayed through witty, sharp dialogue, revealing layers of character development and plot intricacies.
Beyond the individual characters, the story explores the dynamics of magical races and the divides between them, set against the backdrop of mysterious kingdoms and a sovereign's mystique. The protagonist, Queen Clythia, is a study in the harsh realities of leadership, embodying brutality with a rationale that is as compelling as it is ruthless.
This narrative is more than just a casual read; it's an ambitious journey into a world that promises to expand into a legendary tale. The author sets a high bar for character development and world-building, making this story a rich, engaging experience for readers who relish depth and complexity in their fantasy literature. As the story progresses, it's clear that there is much more to explore and discover, making this an exciting prospect for followers of the genre.
S DeltanisRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I read the prologue and the first two chapters. Overall, I gave your story a 4 out of 5. I was a little lost in the beginning, but the overall story I started to grasp and I imagine it starts to make more sense as the story progresses.
In the beginning of the prologue, I was a little lost, perhaps some more scenery descriptions could help paint a vivid picture of where these characters are meeting? This could also bolster imagery for the characters themselves as well.
Verbiage could also be made stronger by avoiding the usage of “he/she said.” Instead of;
““Sorry for the tardiness,” Zahar said in her sweet lullaby voice.
You could help dialogue flow more fluidly with something like this;
“My deepest apologies for the delay in my arrival.” With a wispy air in her words, Zahar tossed her hair over her shoulder.
Clythia hurled her own words in return, “We’re not in the least bit surprised.” --- and continued from there :)
In chapter 1, I think the imagery is much stronger than the prologue and you do a great job of pulling the reader into the story. The descriptions here are captivating!
In chapter 2, there are some noticeable switches in grammar between past and present – keep an eye on that 😊
Again, overall I think you have a wonderful story in the making here and I think this could be made even stronger with some minor grammar edits and some additional descriptions to help bring characters to life. Nice job!