Consignor

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Doomed or Destined?

Man or Monster?

Hero or Heretic?

Join John Sarvod on his journey as he confronts his demons.

A story taken place in a world where Gods, Demons, and Dragons exist.

TLDR: A story of weak to strong. Full Fantasy.

Release Schedule: Biweekly, Saturday GMT 0 - 0:00

Average word count for each chapter: 3.5k (depending)

Book 1, The Destination of Innocence (Chapters 1 - Chapter 6) Finished

Book 2, The Manifestation of Agony (Chapter 7 - Chapter 12) Finished

Book 3, The Execution of Will (Chapter 13 - Chapter 20) Finished

Book 4, The Remembrance of Past (Chapter 21 - Chapter 26)

Book 5, The Song of Strife (Chapter 27 - Releasing)

Illustration links: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/15pGv58Ct8xKc6gg9Hgi6S9NkLE-jd7XK?usp=sharing

I have a backlog already, this story won't be dropped.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: PhantasmicError

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 292
Views: 244,642

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Community Reviews(8)

Theunkownuser24Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style: The style of writing was very entertaining it kept me going even through slower parts of the story. Though in my opinion there weren't many of those so if you're a reader who cares for that. You're probably fine.
Grammar: Honestly I didn't notice any grammar right off the bat. You have to be really nit pic to notice. Which I find really appealing that the writer takes time for that. It shows that they are dedicated to their work.
Story: Ok So the story is AMAZING from what I've read so far I plan on reading more. The best anime I can relate this to is shield hero and I look forward to future Karma. It's hard to go into detail because there is a lot to go over in this story.
Characters: The characters can be a bit cliche at moments but honestly I like it. But it may not be for everyone. Beyond that, the characters are shown really well and shine brightly through the writing.
Overall: This story hit a lot of my favorite bases in fantasy that I don't see commonly put together. This story is a real treat and I hope those who are willing will enjoy it as well.
I hope the best for this writer and I would recommend this story for anyone who's looking for a great fantasy revenge story.
Sincerely-Theunkownuser24
ExperimentRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Spoiler Free Review. *Imported from Scribble Hub*
Wow. Color me impressed.
I thought the initial premise of this was your average western styled fantasy but with slice of life. But there is actually a lot of buildup that pays off later on. Author seems to be cruel towards the MC, but does a damn good job of showing how suffering manifests in a person. The MC is different from most that I've read, he thinks a lot, acts when he is supposed to but is also destructive when he doesn't want to be. You can see from the writing the MC is a very conflicted person early on and he gets challenged as he progresses into the story.
Critique: The earlier parts were a bit cringey, not the bad type but once you reread this it kind of makes sense. The tone of the story is cringey/naive at the start and it gradually gets darker and more serious as the story goes on, it is flavorful. Mistakes can be noticed in earlier works, but I often miss them because I was following the story too much.
Prose: Improves greatly around Chapter 11, that is why I am giving 5 stars instead of 4.5, author is improving. The earlier parts are still fun to read. I think the author is building up to more interesting things as we go on, very entertaining take on monsters that lurk inside rather than outside of us.
Definitely recommend to avid fantasy readers. I have read this twice.
THERE ARE MORE CHAPTERS HERE!!! HOLY SHIT, THERE'S EVEN ILLUSTRATIONS!!! Author is dedicated to his craft! Why doesn't he put them from where I read them?
TamutureRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is a pretty good story for what it is, and while the tags may put off some people, it isn’t extreme like a lot of other generic stuff. It also is pretty original in terms of story and characters that aren't just filler 90% of the time. Mc actually has character to him, not ridiculously inept at showing or receiving emotion and most importantly actually cares. I congratulate the author for making a story that is engaging, different and feel real. There were some minor grammatical mistakes but not unbearable to a degree that it would be unreadable. I do feel that the author should try to double check his work sometimes and hammer out those mistakes to try and improve his work as much as possible.
Shadow1588Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
So this is a good series first and foremost, unfortunately it drags sometimes...OK maybe more than sometimes reminds me of shanara books( the series) the author loves there details...maybe a little to much. If the other could drop maybe 5-8% of excessive detail and speed up the pace by the same amount this book would be a 5.
chestnutriceeeeRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Consignor is a great read for people looking for a slow fantasy story with elements of revenge and hidden powers.
STYLE:
The pacing is great and the flow is good. Dialogues are believable too, though cliched at times. Some scene transitions are difficult to understand and a few descriptions are pretty bareback. The author's writing will likely continue to grow and get more skilled.
GRAMMAR:
There are some spots with missing commas or some with extra commas. Nothing jarring.
STORY:
The strong part of this fiction. For now, it might seem slightly cliched to people but is surely on an interesting take on the niche it tackles. The buildup is good too and makes the reader feel that there will be much more to come. It is exactly what it promises with the description.
CHARACTER:
Other than the main character and the princess, the rest are rather shallow. Some characters come across as plot devices.
The main character really shines. He is likable and interesting. If you excuse some of the cliched lines he uses, the main character is surely someone you can get attached to. The rest will probably be fleshed out more as the plot progresses, can't say too much for now.
Overall. For anyone looking to spend their time in something interesting, look no further. Consignor will surely keep you entertained
SniperkingRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I think it has a lot of potential, but the grammar and prose are lacking. But it really depends on you. It's not unreadable or machine translated. But all those constant little mistakes make it hard for me to get into the story and break my immersion. Really hope they come back and edit when they have the time. This is a really good story at its core
JaXaorRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The premise is good, and the author has interesting ideas, but it is held back by the author's limited skill and expertise. It is evident that this is the authors first attempt at writing a book, as the grammar and writing fall short. Incorrect sentence structure, extra words inserted randomly into a sentence, sentences that take on a completely different meaning due to errors and you only know what the author was actually trying to say because of the context it is in, little tidbits of information that feel unnecessary and should have been explored as the story progressed, etc.
In short, this book desperately needs an editor and/or a rewrite, especially the dialogue, which is just awful to read at times. It's disappointing to see, because for most of these problems there are tools you can use to improve upon them, or material to improve the writing quality in general, the author just needs to use them. You can even notice a general increase in quality as the story progresses, the author just needs to get back to the start and take what he learned to action. I know, it is boring and dull work and not as exciting as continuing to bring your ideas to paper, but you will lose most your readers in the beginning and not in book three.
Another point I am curious about is the separation into different books, since the separation feels really weird. Typically, a book follows a structure with various stages, gradually introducing characters and the world, escalating tension leading to a climax, and then gradually winding down towards the end (following a suspense curve). However, this structure seems absent in your book, and the separation into books lacks a cohesive narrative arc.
You decide to nearly at the end of the first book start the always disliked “academy arc” and I really don’t know why authors still try to put one in almost every fantasy webnovel, but anyway, its possible to make it unique and interesting, but then you decide to end the books only shortly after s
Archer ElfRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
i feel like what te author uploads, the individual pages of chapters, are way too short. i suppose that it does get pepole to click though more, but only becouse they have to click a lot more becouse there are a whole lot more pages, which is just annoying
beyond that i just dont feel strongly about the characters. which i mean, yeah i only got to the second page, its just weird to get to click "next chapter" go to what is usualay most authors second chapter, and not known anything about the characters
anyway its meh overall